I'm very aware that this has been abandoned since 2005, but having stumbled into the KOTOR fandom about 15 years too late, I just want to say I really enjoyed this fic! It's a fantastic AU and I really like how you write Atton and the Exile—both individually and in regards to their turbulent interactions with each other. The story might be unfinished, but nonetheless I really love what has been written and I'm glad you've left this up for us readers to enjoy!

That moment when you find an absolutely amazing fic only to see that it was last updated 12 years ago... AND ENDED ON A CLIFFHANGER! ;-;

It doesnt look like youre going to update this anymore, but I hope you will! Absolutley FANTASTIC! You should know that because of this fic, I paid absolutly no attention to anything happening in Lit or Spanish. I love your Exile-she might be my favorite outof all of theones Ive read about. You seem ro hqve captured Atton perfectly as well, and the bit with Adana is an excellent touch. All in all, you are a fantastic writer, and I hope you keep it up!

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Posted 10 December 2010 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic s Two Cents.

Pre TSL: Atton is sent to collect the Exile, but things go awry.

A relatively good read, with all the calm before the feeling built in.

dude, you dont know what i'd give for you to update this lol

I'm really, really enjoying this story. There are so few KOTOR2 stories with Atton and the exile, and even fewer good ones, and as such I was so pleased to find yours. It's very good and and incredibly addictive. It's really tragic to see that you don't seem to be continuing it. I really wish that you would continue to write it, but I do understand if you don't. You aren't obliged to cater to the wishes of random people and you do have a life of your own. Thus, regardless of whether you choose to continue or not, thank you immensely for what you've written so far. I derived a lot of enjoyment from reading it and I wish you well in your future endeavors.

Hey-

I don't know if you still do this but i really like it. I'm a writer myself and had some serious writer's block. When videogames (yes videogames) no longer worked as a muse, i turned to online writing. And this is some good stuff...really helped with the blockage. Write more!

Wow, this is amazing! I love KOTOR 2 and Atton is such a great character :)

Please don't leave us hanging here. It'd be a waste of an incredible storyline

OI NEXT CHAP!

Hey if you ever update i'm looking foward to it marvelous story keep up the good work :)!

Will review later, just favouriting now. :)

I-Love-this! Wow...just...WOW! Please, please ,PLEASE update! Its been like 2 years! You are an amazing writer! D

come on please update, youre killing us here, ALMOST TWO YEARS NOTHING! COME ON! dont let such a great story go to waste...such unjustice...

among others loyally here

-justanother

do it for the countless of fans here...

A cliffhanger! lol I wish there was more of Adana in the game too. Very exciting story! ;] And I do love your snippit series as well. Kudos to you!

-twinklet26. :)

I love this story. The premise of your story is one of the most original I've seen on this site; and your character development is excellent, especially Atton.

I really hope you continue posting!