I like that Leo Kisho and Kyoshi are together. They look warm. But they still look vague It's not that I don't trust them with Leo. But you know what they are in, right? But it didn't change the story that all three were friends.
I like it. It looks mysterious. Hope you come to your story But if I don't update, I can accept it.

This story is amazing in its concept, the idea that Leonardo would never do anything to hurt his family and the extent to which he would do this, and the subsequent reactions of his family. The introduction of Kyoshi, Ichiro, Kisho, and Ryugi and their conflict with Karai was an interesting aspect to explore - I have read stories where the Foot in general have a problem with Karai, but it is fascinating to view this from an insider perspective, especially the Elites. You've managed to craft this story really beautifully, and I hope that you continue this.

I DEMAND JUSTICE!

The stories really great! I'd hope you would write more often but its okay :) . I love the Story so far and i'm really excited to get to read the Rest of IT.
Ps: please try to write more chapters in shorter Time! :)
That would make me really Happy :)
Greetings!

I am really enjoying the brotherly moments, especially the memories of each brother with Leo as turtle tots. And giving the Elite's personalities and a rift among themselves, I really feel bad for the two of them! I hope you find time to update at some point.

I really like the story plot keep going ; )

Update!

GET THE NEXT CHAPTER DONE QUICKLY!
It's a nice fanfic. :-P

This story you have here is really wonderful. Great plot idea and character development (who knew the Elites had names and personalities!?), wonderful brotherly bonds and feeling their confusion and anger, Leo's dreams in the earlier chapters are creepy and the flashbacks of him and don and the computer monitor are heartwarming. Looks like you are gone from this site, but just in case wanted to post on how great this story is. And, to beg on my knees for an update- pleeeease update :)

YOU ARE EVIL!I will like you again if you finish this stupid story though.

GRRR! I HATE cliffhangers!Promise me you'll make a new one soon?

Great chapter! Make another one ASAP!

Holy mother of freakin shoot- THAT WAS EXCELLENT! I LOVE the way you wrote this! You really detailed the brothers' sufferings. Especially Leo's! And I never thought I would like the Foot Elites in this. I actually felt sorry for Kisho and Kyoshi! And that's saying something considering the fact that I hate those four when they beat up Leo in season 1. Keep writing! Just noticed that you updated last 2008... *does a double take* WHAT THE-?! SERIOUSLY?! That's like, almost 6 years ago! UPDATE NOW! That's like a very HUGE cliffhanger! I mean it! UPDATE! :O

Great job on the story, please update soon thanks. :)

Great job on the story so far, I liked it alot, please keep going and update real, real, real, soon thanks. :) :)