Interesting version of an entrance to Wonderland. I'll have to read more; I'm definitely intrigued.

I love this, the style is very similar to the originals!

hahaha Dinah 2 talks juat about as much as me lol i can just talk and talk and talk lol ...well i love this so much so so sososo much x3 ;3 :3

Emo

omg thay can talk in there minds O.O lol i love this soo much thank you 4 the good story x3 ;3 :3

Emo

omg omg i love this Alice in wounderland is my fave movie in the whole world i loveit so much i really like this to i must read on x3 ;3 :3

Emo

joey dearest.

are you delusional? adding me to your fave. authors?

that is absolutely... astounding

*jaw drop*

on another note joey-kins, i love your writing. i love the way you incorporated the cat. and thank YOU for writing such a wonderful, wonderful story!

Ooh, Dinah's full of herself. And she called her owner "little girl" and "mistress" which somehow doens't seem fitting.

I HAVE bothered to read to the end. Such a life I have, no? And to think - I have to write SO much for the content of the website for school. Anyway, since you are open to flaming, *ahem*

In "Dinah andSnowdrop,and ebony black Kitty.", you forgot a space between "and" and "Snowdrop", and "," and "and".

Yeah.

Otherwise, good start to the AiW fanfic.

Yes as wonderful as the rest

Perfect start

Yet again mistaken for Mary-Ann

Oh I suppose that makes sense _

Enjoyable

Great!

Groovy