I was definetly not expecting that at the end but it was a good fics though.

short but well... i was expecting a multichapter TwT... INO:NEJI fics are just so rare -_-'

A little short, but I like it. Good job. And tsk tsk, Ino. Smoking stains your teeth.

Amazing. All of it. "The tumor weighs down Ino’s left lung, and the colour of it makes Neji sick." Succint.

OH NO! I wonder if she knows... i wonder if Neji will save her. Aw... hahaha. But i liked this. Its funny though. Why would Neji be hanging around her shop in the first place though? You should write more into that. Because i would so read it! :)

O.o ino...smoking... srry cant picture it. or the pairing... but on the bright-side i think you pretty much kept them in character. "The tumor weighs down Ino’s left lung, and the colour of it makes Neji sick." i like that line. T.T poor ino's gonna die...

...InoNeji? Interesting choice of pairing. Although Neji is not the type to couple with the loud, rambunctious Ino, this fiction was pretty slight. I have to say that your writing style is pleasant though. Good job, but I have to say that the pairing is not ideal.

...Your ficcage has a tendency to break my heart, but only in the gentlest way possible.

(claps hands) sad, but I loved it! I hope you write more!

Well, the kicker line - "The tumor weighs down Ino’s left lung, and the colour of it makes Neji sick" - cut right through ME! All through the piece I was wondering what Neji's bad habit was, but I guess now we know. Such powers aren't always a gift, are they? This was extremely well done!