Reviews for Revolution
aki93 chapter 5 . 4/20
DAAWI ahhaha it's just too good
Killerpickle chapter 18 . 1/4
Why do you keep doing things that make Harry seem incompetent and removes any form of real progression he had.
In this story he is just the butt of a bad joke to be a pity party that always does stupid things like seriously
Killerpickle chapter 17 . 1/4
Ok I’m going to be honest but are you stupid there is no possible way for ginny, a girl who has had no actual combat experience beside the two fights with the death eaters where she had a lot of backup against win against two people who are war veterans in a fair dual. I could understand if she won the tournament because of a points and put up a good fight.
didyousaytim chapter 17 . 12/23/2019
We miss dumbledore who undoubtedly would have gotten ginny's memory to get the entire prophecy. I dont see all tjree snape, lupin AND mcgonagal miss that - let alone hermione and harry.

Very very out of character for herimione to not ask 10 questions in one breath in her own apartment.
Nemhain2009 chapter 41 . 5/9/2019
Enjoyed reading your story!
Sleepyhawk502 chapter 41 . 5/9/2019
Again you hav done a wonderful job! Thanks for sharing!
riverrat1 chapter 41 . 2/28/2019
This is a great story. Harry has a lot of potential but Severus has his work cut out. He is very immature, maybe because he had to grow up without parents and Dumbledore always let everything slide instead of reprimanding him. He is always doing something his way without asking a grownup, foremost Severus, Mr. Weasley or his trainer. Heck, even Hermione is making better decisions. I cringe every time he is doing something he isn't supposed to. Most things work out because of dumb luck but some things could be easier on him if he would just listen. Of course there were a few times where he had to make a decision right away but other than that he needs to grow up. Not everything is his responsibility.
Regardless, maybe this is one of the reasons I do like this story so much. It shows a young man trying to go through life and fit in and trying to do good and sometimes failing, like everyone else. Now on to "Resolution".
Guest chapter 41 . 12/7/2018
Great! I just finished this and it was much fuller than I had remembered.
Guest chapter 40 . 12/7/2018
Wow, great idea about the prophecy, the tiger cub, etc. I still have questions about a few previous sections. Lupn used a silver fork at Pamela's with no side effects. Bella went to torch Minerva's house, but the house (or lack of house) was never mentioned again. I use to worry that everyone including Lucius seemed to know where Snape & Harry lived, and Arthur said Hermione was unlisted as a magical address (even though she uses magic there). I wondered about privacy issues, legal registration, etc. Now you explain that there's an address book at the post office so Harry was able to find Askunk. You can tell how much I am into the story, even though it's my second reading.
Guest chapter 38 . 12/6/2018
LOL. Amusing to see Sev off-kilter in the last bit. And earlier i laughed at idea that if Harry had gone to France with Tonks & Kerry Ann, I'm sure the ever-faithful Vineet would have gone as well. Perhaps Aaron would have cut the apron strings and gone. Rogan might have gone for a fresh start. Who does that leave, Blackpool who needs a new partner? Maybe she would have gone. Good thing Arthur doesn't have to re-staff after all.
Guest chapter 35 . 12/6/2018
Sev's right, Ginny and Harry are a lot alike. Neither will follow orders to sit and wait. lol
Guest chapter 32 . 12/5/2018
Why is nobody protecting Snape while he's in the hospital? The Death Eaters will still try to kill him if given a chance? To quote MAD Magazine's Alfred E. Newman: "What, me worry?'
Guest chapter 28 . 12/4/2018
Great chapter. Meanwhile, I keep wondering if Harry's furry mouth was due to him channelng Kali. And remember the dusty room of dark books Harry found when he was 9? I wonder if they have been burned, stolen, rescued, or what.
Guest chapter 26 . 12/4/2018
There're never enough hours in the day or days in the week for me to spend on this series. Or for Harry to practice his Auror training, his Underworld training, his staunching, his Ravenclaw manual skill, etc. Thanks for keeping both of us so busy! lol
Guest chapter 23 . 12/3/2018
Personally i love the co-operation of Ginny and Sev in their efforts to protect Harry. The mutual respect and friendly competitiveness is sweet (and funny). If not for the age difference I'd be rooting for a match between them. Sev has already announced that Ginny is the only one who can understand Harry & Sev's past, due to her own history with the diary, etc.
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