i luv it so much

its a nice warm hearted story

more plz lol

it was good!

I was a little confused when Sara's father came into the picture out of the blue...maybe you could introduce him into thoughts beforehand, or work something out...it was a little off putting. It seemed to me like it added a sense of randomness...but randomness isn't quite the right word. The crying was a little random too...*shrug* Sorry!

The ending was AWESOME though. _ good tie-ins to the beginning. _

I really enjoyed this are a talented writer,keep the stories comming.

short and sweet with a tiny bit of angst thrown in, great job!

AWESOME!

Cute, Like it