"Who is she?" Adam asked, a look of concern on his face.

He walked over and placed his hand on top of her fiery red hair. "This beautiful young lady sitting on the chair is Amy's long lost daughter, Christine Dumas."

"What the hell are you doing? Have you lost your mind?" Adam was shocked.

ya what?addy beats amy,yet HES concerned about what his tool is doin?

um...no offence,but were you or have you been abused in the past?see..oddly cant help noticing in all your storys,women have been abused by their partners

actually...i'm more thinking 'stevie richards and a woman?'no offence to him..hes always gonna be ravens bytch

thought you said 4 handsome men?can only picture 3,and thats my hunter,randy and dave batista

good vary good !

Once again you know how to make happy endings and this one just might be the best happy ending that I have ever seen out of all of your stories. No words can describe the sense of closure that this ending conveys to a reader, it is like a fog that slowly fades when the light returns to remove the darkness. For your next story I think it should be based off of Chad Kroeger's song for the movie Spider-Man Hero. Congratulations once again on making another good story and good work as a writer plain and simple.

Justice was served and Mark and Adam will probably not live long enough to reflect on their failed and useless lives. Once again I applaud justice in a story and this delivered it perfectly.

This chapter ended superbly with Amy and Christine finally reunited and I will certainly love the next chapter where she finally confronts Mark Harris and Edge. Only question is how will she deal with them? For your next story I have got an idea as to what it should be called: Your next story should get the title Hero based off of the Chad Kroeger song for I think that a story that went along with a hero theme will do great. I think that you might like my idea for the name for your next story along with this review as a whole. And by the way I also happen to live in Ohio just like you do.

Mark Harris! That motherfucker needs to die and I want him dead and if you know me I want him to die by either Hunter's hand or Undertaker's hand or even better perhaps by a reformed Edge's hand. If Mark Harris does not die by story's end at least send him to a maximum security prison where he might die by the hands of some gang members. Knowing you this will probably be the ultimate fate of Mark Harris in the end: His death by either gang members or by the forces of good.

I pity Adam for he actually has a problem of his own for he hired an obessive pervert to track down Lita and Hunter but the moment I think takes the cake for being good is where Lita found out that her daughter Christine is infact still alive. On Gail Kim being horny maybe she was not as horny as Lita was when he and Hunter did it their second time but damn she was very horny when she did it with Randy Orton. As I listen to songs like Hero by Chad Kroeger and Runaway Train by Soul Asylum I wonder what else you can come up with for this story but if it is anything like the rest of this story and your other stories it will turn out to be a masterpiece if done properly.

Damn Lita is sure horny around Triple H! I have got a feeling that Gail Kim will be as horny if not more so than Lita around Randy Orton. Same can be also said for Victoria and Dave Batista. I do wish that you give us some clue at least so that we can guess as to what the identity of Edge's mystery helper is so that we don't have to pull crap right out of our asses.

The bad guy in the background is none other than the blonde villain known as Edge. It doesn't take a rocket scientist to figure out that Adam would follow Amy secretly and I also feel like JBL and Steven Richards will do the same. This story is truly looking up to be another great Lita/Hunter story.

Out of all the bad guys I have seen I would have never guessed that my most hated guy JBL would be a villain in your story and of course just like on Smackdown you made him a villain. It is good to review your stories for they might inspire me to write yet another story that might be about a different sort of character.

This is just like your other stories with the pairings of Batista/Victoria and Randy/Gail. Something else that was different from your other stories was that Matt Hardy turned out to be one of the good guys in this story and that sits with me a whole hell of a lot better than when he is potrayed as evil in some fics if the reason for being bad is not justifiable. In all I was glad that Hunter kicked Edge's ass for he needed a beating and a lesson in manners from a real man.

Well Nina you certainly knew that I would show up to review your newest story and guess what I did. Anyway this is yet another Hunter/Lita fic which I feel like will turn out similar to your other Hunter/Lita fics in that Lita is with an abusive guy and Triple H saves her from a bad relationship. You seem to be following a pattern with your stories and that is good for you have your own style of story type and these Hunter/Lita fics have a style in them that no other story has. My only question is will this story be as big as your first batch of stories that I have reviewed?