This was a great story. I love the ending, it really showed how far they have come. Great job!

finally! an immortal writer! u shall forever be remembered as e 1st one! lol!

hey, tis is pretty good! from wat i remembered...i didn't really know much abt goodwin's beginnings either coz by e time i got hooked to e show, lame as it was; it was already like e middle of e season...so tis was refreshing.

so u have more stories up ur sleeve?please do write more!

Love the story - please continue soon.

Oh Wow! Very good story, please continue! I love that show and Goodwin is my Fav character on the show! I give it 2 thumbs up!

I really miss "The Immortal" and I'm extreamly glad that someone is writing about it. Good job so far.

OMG, finally an Immortal story. I have been waiting for so long for someone to write one. And so far it's amazing. You are so in character. Man I can't wait for more. You actually have me thinking of writing one. Great job!

-CJ Jade