i know you wrote and finished this forever ago but just wanted to say it was one of the best i have read. Loved how it was funny!

hi :) i love the first 2 chapters :D :D

its way funny, thanks for the great story so fair!

..alright. This is just... bad. Bad, bad, bad. I literally can't read anymore of this.

This was written very long ago so hopefully you've evolved in your writing. Your characters are just .. just awful and I really don't mean for this to be a flame but it's hard to look past your characters and the dialog.

The fact that they mysteriously are fluent in Latin yet can't understand the meaning of that certain Latin phrase is beyond me. And the fact that the native Latin speakers didn't understand "Equinophobia" is also bizarre for most there would have recognized "equino" as the Latin "equinus" meaning horse and the Greek word "phobia" meaning fear.

"The most beautiful woman he'd ever seen." What? Wow. I know you warned the Sue-ism but I had no idea such blatant uses of them existed.

And I'm pretty sure Lancelot didn't necessarily "enjoy" killing people - the whole whining "But I wanted to kill him" would probably had come off as exceedingly annoying, not to mention horrific. Especially when he had been showing the character leniency.

So ...

About the humor.

I find a lack a lack of humor in the entirety of the two chapters I drudgingly read. You tried with them making up nicknames but it just came off as really immature. I'm 19 so I in their age group and I can promise that names like that are given by tweens.

So...

Good luck on your current projects (I'm not at all a fan of Twilight or Star Trek... so I most likely won't be reading them.)

-Alison

sorry i wanted to review the last chap but i did the first time i read it so i just wanted to say, that this is an amzaing story, about friendship kindess love and above all else burning hot knights, this was an amziang story that i have reread and hope to do so many times more, i love the part about when they die and go back to the real world and then they are like getting ready to leave, it's my favourite chappie by far, u are really talented and u kept me hooked the whole time and both times i read it plz continue to write (maybe about the whole Alternate Reality/time Breaks, for the other series) or anything at all, i love this story and btw can i plz bags Sir Ivan or Sir Timothy? u r REALLY TALENTED plz wrire more! and yeah i love the whole, sacrificing one good thing for an even better one (i.e. their old lives for their new ones)

Ur #1 Fan Buznuz1 (soz my review is so long!)

i love this story

This is the most amazing story ever! I WISH I HAD FRIENDS LIKE THEM! i was just wondering...wouldn't the girls miss anything from their real world? also i love the FBI thing, i had a feeling ju would do that...

THIS STORY ROX! it is really deep about how they gave up their lives in th present for ones in a completely different galxy/dimension deep... UR AN AMAZING WRITER! plz write more i love this story and i seriously wish i had friends like this!

btw do dagonet and fulcinia end up together? and is alecto a goodn pope? cuase isnt he in love with Candace! anyway i was up reading this story till 12.41 at night cause i loved it so much! UR REALLY TALENTED AND THIS STORY ROX!

Just had to share this because I thought it was funny.

Just as I reading the last half the story, the song "Lolipop" came on.

Haha

-Hannah

OMG.

I read this entire story in a day.

FABULOUS!

If you dont write anymore, I will cry fat salty tears.

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I just finished reading this story and i absolutly love it, i love the ending its really original i didn't expect it. the Mary Sue Department made me giggle. This is one story i am defonatly adding it to my favourite stories. Keep on writing!

This is one of my favorite stories. It is really good.

This is interesting so far. I'm enjoying all the sarcasm of the girls and their responses to the knights. :)

I cannot tell you how amazing this story is. You really brought it to life. But I must say that, even though you based this story off your friends, my friends and I are quite scared at how you also got our personalities and descriptions dead on.

I am most like Nicole. Loveable (so I'm told), slightly trampy, always happy, brown hair etc. The only difference is that I have blue/green/gray eyes. I also am in love with Gawain.

My other friends you got dead on. You even got my friend Rose dead on while describing Feroina.

You are a truly amazing, and very authentic writer. Keep up the amazing work.

that story soo made my day

it was hilarious!

ur a really good writer

plz write more!

this is by far one of the best Fanfics i have ever read!

Congratz!

OMG this is the best story I have EVER READ!

I LOVE IT!

Luv Rayn