Great chapter! loved that scene between Dananso and Boone! so sweet! Update soon and merry xmas to you too:P

AH! *goes freakin' insane* You had no idea how excited I was to see an update out. Sorry it took me a little long to review, I had Lost and Jericho to watch last night, but trust me, I read as much as I could. The whole captive thing was just so well-done, I loved it! What could be one of the hardest things about writing is making child characters believable, and I could actually picture Chase as some roughed-up type of kid...everything like how you described him. Yet he was still a true child when he needed to be. The ending there with Sawyer attacking him and Chase's reaction and how he just started sobbing...wow, spot-on.

And, o.O so is the kid in the flashbacks really Danoso? Or...hm...I'll have to think about this one. Very clever how the italics parts were done. And, aww, poor Jack! That whole part was very well-done as well. 'disadvantages of fighting doctors...noted', hehe:p And I thought the Charlie and Claire scene was very sweet...I loved how Charlie recovered from his yelling at her and also his 'I'm not bloody God!' No, Charlie, you're just a bloody rock god;) :p

I admit that I'm gonna have to go back and reread the parts with Jack being taken captive- though I'm pretty sure I remember everything with the caves and the explosion. And, aww, Kate admitting her feelings was sweet. I'm always picky about how Kate confessing her love for whomever is written, but I think I liked how you did it- the "I think" was perfectly added in.

Anywhoo, LOVED the chapter(uh, duh:p), and I'll definetely be back after the holidays, waiting for an update:D Hell, I'll even take an update before then;)

Hi Cohen101,

Wow, that was definitly worth the wait but ah, another cliffhanger! :) I hope Danoso gets better soon so we can see some happy stuff go on between her and Boone (and maybe a little Jack/Kate action too)

I'm a little worried with Danoso being left alone with all this, but I totally love the Others vs. Kate plot! That was an *excellent* version of the tail-section...Chase is a kid? Hehe. I really liked the introduction to their characters(unless we've met them before?), and I thought all around that it was a really cool idea...and I was hoping that they'd run into a Lostie and take them captive:-p I also really liked that Sawyer got his fight in, after that conversation with Kate. I like his resistance he put up against Jack's way of calming Danoso, and I liked the suspense that came with the rescue attempt. I also really liked Boone and definetly found him in character in his little section...can't wait to see what that plot leads to:D And it was so cute when Jack and Kate held hands there for a second and Sayid noticed:D Really, really awsome chapter.

I loved it and I realyy hope you update soon because I can't wait to see what happens! I'm already in love with Chase so I hope he gets more of a part and all, but I can't wait to see how Kate handles this. I liked how you put her in that position she's deep down terrified to be in, the trapped thing, and I liked how quick Chase was to knock her down and all, mirroring the taile's immediate ruthlessness we've seen. Heh, I liked the mentioning of Ana being a scapgoat and the introduction of all the taile characters, like Libby. Bottome line, I liked it, can't you tell? So, lovin' the story, hope to see some more soon!

It's about freaking time! lol. This was a crazy chapter, but crazy in a good way, lol.

The whole Kate and the people from the other side of the island meeting thing was interesting. And poor Boone. He's gonna be like, Danoso! And she'll be all delusional... that should be interesting.

Screw school, get the next chapet up soon, I've been waiting forever for this one! :)

i just read the whole thing for the first time and it was great! i cant wait to see what happens to kate...dont keep us waiting!

A long, exciting and amazing chapter :]

Great chapter! it was long and full of good quality writing to read! update soon!:D

Hey, you know i love this story, this is just a reminder that we are all waiting for an update :) I really, really want to read more! (but no pressure, lol)

OH MY GOSH!

do you know how suspensified i was while reading that? grr! you need to update soon! if you don't i'll... i'll... i don't know! lol, sorry about that. great chapter. i want more. :)

Woah. That was so cool! The way you mixed the beginning with the end was just awsome, I LOVED it! I had this stupid grin on my face they whole time. I really like the Jate, so cute! Heh, Jack skipping...:-p I also really liked Sawyer in this, and his concern for Danoso. Great chapter!

Brilliant chapter! i love this story so much! i liked how Sawyer was reacting to Danoso, so sweet! Update quite soon!:D

Amazing as usual x

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I love you. You are genius. *bows down to worship genius*

I like it. It has some real good ideas so far (I only read up until Chapter 4. Because you warned me the rest sucked :P)

Before I continue my long trek through your story, I'd like to give some thoughts.

First, holy moly, that's a lot of dialogue. I'm not complaining, as most of it is actually good, but I wish that you could have written more descriptions and maybe some more of the characters thought procesesses (it was a welcome diversion to know what Danoso thinking in the asides). Since, I've never seen Lost, I have no idea who everyone looks like and I would have liked even a short description as each of these characters are introduced.

Also, the storyline about Danoso attacking Boone is a good one. However, I would have preferred not to know if Boone actually remembered anything, it would have added more suspense if we didn't know whether he was as bad as Danoso thinks he is.

I'll continue reading even with the forementioned warning of crappage. :)

I love reading other people's work. ;D