Enjoyed very much

Now to y
The next one.

P.S.: Pleaaase excuse that horrid grammar of mine, its very late where I am and english is not my native language. I promise I am not half as dumb as I sound in this review.

I really really loved this first part of the story and cant wait to read more. One of the best fics I've read so far and without doubt the best in this 'harry has a sibling-who-lived' theme.
Harry is everything I could wish for, and I love that brotherly love. I can see why Harry loves Conner so much. He is absolutly childish and naive but I still see why Harry loves him for that innocence. I also get why everyone Snape hates Lily, doing that to Harry but I gotta admit I grew much more resentful of Snape and Draco. I totally get where they come from. But they act so hypocritical one same hand. Snape wants to see the glory in Harry just as much as everyone else in Connor. He acts much the same as Lily, Dumbledore and the wizarding world in that regard, if not worse because he sees the fault and does what he wants anyways while beeing completly selfish about it. Slytherin is great. Slytherin Harry is great. Your Slytherin Harry is great. Supporting him in that would be great. But trying to seperate him from his Brother, to turn them against each other just to spite James us the absolue worst. Never hated Snape so much. Wanting to turn Harry into a bad replica of himself while simultaneously hating and actively seeking to destroy Connor.. he does Children like Neville and Connor exspecially worse that what was done to himself als child. I am so furious with him!
I wish Harry wouldn't let him do this to him, wouldn't let him drive this wedge between his brother and himself. While reading I wished again and again Harry would act more strongly against Snape and even Draco where his brother is concerned. He reasons he is forced to do most of it but he also lets them seperate him and Connor. He sees it and lets them anyway and I cant see why he would.
Argh, I feel so strongly about this fictional writing of yours!

Well, I had my doubts about the flying lesson, but it turned out better than imagined, especially the following scene. Fucking based, in fact.

Lmao. Why is Draco so hilarious? Fucking perfect. How is this fic so good?! Well, it is. Easily the best HP fic so far.

I'm not much of a Slash shipper, but I'm really excited for this pairing.

Omg. Is this the probably best opening to a Wrong-boy-who-lived twin story ever? No jealously? No bashing? Beleavable? Nice pacing. Harry being awesome YES! Wow. Good stuff.

I thought this would be a cliche WBWL, but it isn’t. I throughly enjoyed this fic much more than others I’ve read, especially when it contained a trope like this :)

I am loving this fic. Chapter 8 and already upset with Lily! WTF!
Oh Harry, good luck

Is it bad that I actively dislike Lily Potter after reading only the first chapter? To make your child feel less and condition them to think that it's only natural is just so repulsive to me.

Oooh that house cup change has never made me more mad!

Great fic!

I love this so much! Please update!

Whoo! This story is brilliant. I honestly thought I’d read all good ‘Harry has a twin’ stories and WBWL and dark Harrys out there, but I found this through a reddit suggestion and I don’t regret reading it one bit. It’s so unique and the writing is really brilliant, and engaging. Can’t wait to keep reading, thank you!

First chapter, seems promising, but I can't help but cringe at a "heart-shaped" scar... Either way, that puny thing won't determine my continuing the story ;)

love this! great job author!

i hate that the potters are like that but i love that harry is supportive and loves his brother and in turn his brother loves him.