Good job

whoo! I’m very happy for Wanda. Everything in her life, save being a mutant, is shaping up into being that of a normal teenager. Kind, supportive family, nice, sweet boyfriend, and good friends.

A nice ending for a nice story! Well done! :)

Ah, all nice and fluffy and warm. I like your endings. The name Denise Dane strikes me as very comic booky. Which I guess is very fitting. Well Lorna and Wanda's sisterly relationship seems very together and firm. Sisters are funny. I know a set of twins that if I bring up the day the showed up in matching outfits (they hate looking alike) or the 'she stole my hair brush' incident, they pick up the argument right where they left off. It's hilarious, but I really shouldn't bring those up. Anyway, I'm anxiously awaiting the next in the AGU series...and whatever it is I decide to write. At the moment it's looking very autobiographical. I have plenty of ideas but I keep getting stuck on how to introduce it all. That and I can't stop listening to the Moulin Rouge soundtrack. So getting to the point. Good stuff and update soon

That was a great ending

Wow! Great fic! I love it! Great job!

Nicely done. You told the story well, creating layers of emotion, not just plunging in to the sweetness that kills... Taking the pieces, you crafted a story that built slowly over the weekend and allowed Wanda to grow at her own pace. I think you did a great job overall.

Aw, what a sweet ending...I like how Denise likes Wanda...I think that if she ever really started anything real with Magneto, she would not have let him send her to the asylum.

great chapter does it mean that your going to carry on with your AGU series now that this story is over hope so keep up the good work

Great work. I can't wait for your next full-length AGU story, especially if it is as sood as your other AGU fics