| Reviews for The Crumpled within a Stack of Paper |
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  Guest chapter 7 . 6/17/2016 I thought you will update this story is old but I just wanted to say I love this story. I liked all the chapters so far you left me wanting more. |
 calista.davis.52 chapter 7 . 3/14/2016 THIS IS GREAT PLEASE UPDATE |
| AAAllisWell chapter 7 . 6/17/2015 I really hope u will update cause this story is too good and interesting! HOPE U UPDATE SOON! |
| laila45 chapter 7 . 10/26/2014 Oh come on,you got to be kidding you peace ,luck and happiness:) |
| hiNAru Aburame chapter 7 . 3/20/2013 Mmmmm, interesting... I hope you continue... please? *-* greetings! n_n |
| blaaaaaaarg chapter 7 . 5/15/2011 aaah omg, I really like this story, although you haven't updated in YEARS so I doubt you're ever going to again, which is a shame. But I think you had a really good idea going on here, well done! |
| infiniteternity chapter 7 . 2/4/2011 This story is so charmingly cute that I cant help but melt a little when I read it. Although it's hard for me to imagine the time or setting that this story is being placed in, the interactions between the characters is very much real (except for perhaps, Ten-Ten who seems to be playing a outlandish, outspoken parody of herself). I would love more information about the social place of those at the brothel and how such an institution operates; are those that are sold still given a place in society or are they lower than low? What is Naruto considered to be? What does being a servent mean? If your story is getting me this intereted, then you must be doing something well! Please do continue soon; I love reading about their changing dynamics. Thank you for your story and for all the hard work! |
| Moriarty-Florence Moriarty chapter 7 . 12/26/2010 i don't usually like stories like this, but the way you have written this and the way you have structured it just pulled me in. i cant wait for the next chapter. love, Flo. |
| Tenshi-chan chapter 7 . 11/20/2010 Great story I love it! Really I do, you just portray the characters so well. That and it has such an intresting plot i have never read a story where Hinata owns naruto before. It was very refreshing to read something new that was done as well as this. It is a little sad that it has not been updated in two years. I reallly hope that you will finish this story. Thank you for the great read! |
| Stillreadingonhereafteryears chapter 7 . 5/15/2010 Omg I love this cant wait for the next chapter! |
| lorkster chapter 7 . 12/11/2009 Oh my...this story grabbed my attention. Please update...pretty pretty please |
| KdaAnimefan chapter 7 . 3/27/2009 an enjoyable story, i look forward to later chapters |
| kally-kal chapter 7 . 3/27/2009 Why don't you continue this? This story is awesome! |
| someone chapter 7 . 3/16/2009 UPDATE PLEASE! Your story is just fucking awesome, I can't wait for the next chapter, PLEASE UPDATE! |
| HimitsuAi18 chapter 7 . 1/3/2009 can you please do another chapter that was like the perfect ending but i soo want to see what happens next |
