I really enjoyed reading this. There is one problem that I noted. If I remember correctly, Rodney and the others didn't know about the virus at that point in the episode. It's still well written though.

i love it poor Rodney alway getting bet up

Needs to be rated for language. What I read, I liked, but not the language so regretfully I stopped. But a wonderful beginning, I liked the inclusion of those who had already died in front of Rodney. His take on how each of them would have reacted. A nice flair for making them different instead of the same voice wearing a different name.

I really enjoyed that. Thanks very much!

This is very good! Nice character insights, and an interesting look at the way that the scene played out on the show.

Whoa, this was really good! I loved how you wrote this, very awesome! :D You really got into their heads and I could really see everything as it happened, which is definatly a sign of a great story!

Completely beyond words.

I am actually crying. That was a powerful, questioning and in depth portrayal of those three characters.

I only watched Intruder today, and you captured perfectly the scene, and also the way it was covered afterwards.

Maybe I'm confused with the whumping fandom too, but your little insight was brilliant.

Finally! I've read this story a couple times already and have tried to leave feedback, but alas, no anonymous readers could leave one! But I decided to try again and YES, I am able to leave feedback!

WOW,WOW,WOW! Absolutely loved this story! So well very well written! Loved how you were able to show each of the characters feelings and what was going through their minds! And showing the friendship and concern they hold for each other. Really well done! I will be looking forward to your next story! Hope to see it soon! Hurry! I've added you to my favorites!

...This is a ONE-SHOT? NO! I can respect your decision, but damn...Wonderful characterization. I loved how you've analysised the relationship between Rodney, John, and Carson. I await your next piece.

It was really beautiful, the way you wrote this. I mean, the facts are exactly like in the show but you made is simply so much more meaningful and perceptive. Thank you for writing it, I truly loved it. :)

Wow! That was a very interesting introspective story. I liked how Carson could see inside Rodney and eventually see the same things within himself. Wonderful writing.

Now that was fantastic! That story was so intense, so deep, I love it and it makes all perfect sense, how could Rodney go on after watching Lindstrom die only a few minutes ago, because he was strong enough and what else should he really do?, keep this up, I like your style!

Wonderful story an extremely wonderful perspective.

Woah, this was very good. Most interesting insight. Those poor guys, eh? Poor Rodney, he's really came out fighting, didn't he? But as you say, what else can they do? Excellent work.

This is quite possibly the most in-depth, emotionally on-target story I've read yet. The relationship between Sheppard and McKay is a fascinating one, and you've nailed their friendship and the understanding they have for each other. Thanks for a great story.