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  raven chapter 1 . 7/20/2014 NO NO NO ...look great idea but not jimmy man. not anyone (no ofense) Carl because he has some good reasons to kill him self but jimmy ...yes jimmy is teased but ( im not just saying this because i love jimmy and have no exprenice in being bulled i do have exprenice on that subject..)we all know jim is a freckin genuis and has wonderful parents plus has a metal dog ...I WHOULD LOVE TO HAVE A METAL GREAT DANE! (yes i know gordard is not a great dane im just saying) still love the idea ,but not preson in the idea. btw thanks for the number. :3 |
 AntiqueDreams chapter 1 . 9/29/2012 I enjoyed the way you used minutiae to create a surreal atmosphere. "Rise, fall. Rise, fall. Rise, fall."...when you're depressed, the world really does shrink down to a series of numbing details. |
| linklover77 chapter 1 . 4/18/2012 Wow...this was a moving piece. It really broke my heart when Cindy told him to drop dead. I almost wanted to shout out to her and tell her to take back what she had just said. This just goes to show you need to be careful about what you say to others. You never know what a person is experiencing. Poor Jimmy. :'( Nice A/N at the end. I sincerely hope it'll have helped some people out. There is just so much to live for, and even if life is bleak, it never lasts like that for long. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2011 is that phone number real? |
| Nal'dralar chapter 1 . 2/19/2007 Very moving and touching, great job. |
| Sly Cooper chapter 1 . 7/7/2006 wow just wow excellent story very powerful indeed |
| Sk8er765 chapter 1 . 6/25/2006 great job! even though it's a one-shot, can you make a sequel or another chapter? it's so good! |
| SoCalSucks chapter 1 . 5/19/2006 How do you know it'll get better? Are you depressed? Are you a minority? Are you poor? Are you grateful yet still wish you had a better life? Do you sleep in the same bedroom as three other people? Do you live in a crappy apartment? Do you have to constantly get rides from people or walk 3 miles home? How do you REALLY know it'll get better? ARE YOU GOD? |
| RemembertheLegacy chapter 1 . 4/30/2006 *lip trembles* WAH! You have to be one of the best writers on the site. I love all your stories. Now I must go. *sniff* |
| philip chapter 1 . 4/12/2006 ahh ha ha! this is a great yet heart renching you used brilliant details and kept me locked in overaall this you're second best story next to stealing my heart but this was still sad enough to make me cry that is all |
| philip chapter 1 . 4/11/2006 Amazing story extremly well writen but tremendesloy upsetting. You seem to have a kanack for writing sad stories |
| Stay-Away chapter 1 . 3/21/2006 is this a real phone nuber or not cause some times i wanta comite suasuied |
| Me chapter 1 . 12/11/2005 WHHA! :( :( Um, it was good tho I doubt Cindy would be THAT clueless |
| greg9570 chapter 1 . 11/5/2005 Quiet, I am not fond of your moribundity. It comes out in so many of your stories that it is beginning to disturb me now. You are the best author on this site, and I would like to see some stories from you that aren't about death. |
