I Love your story, it makes me laugh a lot. I love how you portrayed tezuka and fuji's characterers and the others as well. But I especially like it that ryoma is not dense or insensitive in your story. I hate it when they make ryoma impossibly clueless it hurts to read. But i was actually thinking how ironic would it be if fuji and Tezuka ended up together instead, or if the three of them just form a threesome, especially after their date at the amusement park. Fate and destiny will definitely throw a fit. LoL

HA HA HA

yay! Pillar pair FTW! I don't like thrill pair...or perfect pair.

I was on team fuji...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA this is so funny! Great work! Love it ... maybe i think (sometimes I review when im unknowingly hypo ... even though I dont think this is one of those times!) super funny!

cool story! haha.. i really can't get over the fact that Fate actually chose MIZUKI of all people.. haha.. well.. at least Destiny was using her brain and got Yukimura.. haha.. whoa! Seigaku probably had a field day when Tezuka let Ryoma off on being late! haha.. tonikaku.. i really like the happy ending you made.. i would have cried a lot if Ryoma was paired up with Fuji.. haha.. and I agree with FallenAngel Sayu.. Cupid really is STUPID.. P

I'm glad your story had a happy ending. I wouldn't have minded if Ryoma got together with either Tezuka or Fuji as long as none of them were hurt. It's good that Fuji realised that his feelings for Ryoma were platonic and that they still have a very close relationship even after that.

That was great! I especially liked it when Ryoma came to practice late again and how everyone was so shocked when Tezuka didn't give him laps. Well, at least they're all on the same page now.

The FujiRyo was just so funny! It would be great if they could have another date. And I think Fuji, Ryoma and Tezuka are all very in character even while in this very strange situation for them all.

I loved that ending. It's definitely going to cause a reaction out of everyone. And even if it's sort of a triangle - I don't usually like triangles - this story is still really easy to read.

An interesting start. I especially like the first paragraph with how you characterised emotions and usually intangible things, giving them an actual identity. That was interesting.

xD great story

& btw stupid cupid! hates u glare~

pillar pair 4evr

I have to say, that was VERY well-written. Although I enjoy the Thrill pair more, (Ryoma and Fuji are my unofficail heros) I think you did a wonderful job on the Pillar pair . You had a very orignal concept going on. I loved it.

Ahhaahaa... I thought I was gonna die laughing at the deities. That was a nice unique idea :)

Good story, it kept me curious to who Ryoma will end up with till the end.

Hoping to see more of your fics.

-Crys

“Tennis match, winner keeps Echizen.” HONESTLY LAMO. *pets sanada's head.* eep don't kill me.

Lol, Fuji is rubbing off on Ryo-chan.

WHAT ~! IT's NOT THRILL PAIR!