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I do like this story , but it has one flaw in which could not escape me even as I got to the last chapter , there is no way in any reality where the Hokage would allow a clan to essentially break the container of the nine tails , how useful is a host if they can't use the Chakra of the beast , the fact that Naruto's seal allowed him the use of the beasts Chakra was one of the biggest most important facts of canon , I know you haven't updated in a while and you probably won't read this but I needed to speak my mind , for the most part it was a good read though

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that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

This was nice. A good story.

Damn love it

you focused to much on the chuunin ecam arc instead of fully developing naruto it would be great if you had finished this and released the curse seal

The story is great, I just have to say you kinda pissed me off by letting the Hyuuga council treat the Fourths son like that

interesting story

I know this is a long shot but is there any chance you will finish this story. It is interesting story and I wish for you to finish what you started.

This story seemed interesting at first, but then you went and put the curse seal on Naruto, why on earth would the hokage allow the son of yondaime to be enslaved? a jinchuriki that can be killed instantly is of no use to anyone, you make it seem like on chapter 16 Hiashi saved naruto from being a weapon, when he simply gave the tool for people who hate him to kill and control him easily. And you allow him to partake in shinobi missions even though his not a shinobi? cant do elemental jutsus, his a slave, a jinchuriki, and he doesnt give a shit when he finds out about his parents? thats just bloody ridiculous, you've made things so stupid its not even funny.

this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!