No offense but sometimes you are a real Debby downer when it comes to writing endings for your stories.

wow awesome.

OH MY GOD!. I LITERALLY JUST READ A REVIEW BY AND I'VE NEVER BEEN MORE HAPPY THAT THEY HAVE A CHANCE OF SURVIVAL I CAN ALREADY SEE THE SMILING FACES OF THERE FRIENDS WHILE THERE IN THE HOSPITAL BEDS TOGETHER AND THE STAY OF EVERYTHING IN CINDYS HOUSE IS PROOF THAT SOMETHING IFY WAS GOING ON AND SURE THERES THE ONE OFFICER WHO GOT KILLED BUT IM SURE EVERYTHING EILL WORK OUT FOR EVERYONE THANK YOU FOR THE STORY THAT REALLY DIDN'T END YET FOR THE UNIVERSE THIS STORY TAKES PLACE IN I HOPE TO ONE DAY SEE A SEQUEL TO THIS STORY OBOUT JIMMY AND CINDY WITHOUT ALL THE VIOLENCE AND FOCUSING ON ROMANCE. IF YOU EVER WRITE A SEQUEL SET IT THE MOMENT THIS ONE ENDED IF YOU HAVEN'T ALREADY.

YOU! MOTHER! FUCKER! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO RUIN THE STORY BY KILLING THEM! YOU COULD HAVE BEEN KIND AND GIVE PEOPLE A HAPPY ENDING! AFTER ALL THEY'VE BEEN THROUGH YOU KILL THEM!? JUST AS HORRIBLE AN ENDING AS THE LET ME IN FANFICTION AND SOUTH PARK STYLE FANFICTION! AND THEY WERE EVEN LONGER THAN THIS! IM NOT HAPPY THE FIRST FANFICTION I READ BY YOU WAS THIS! I EVEN FEEL LIKE CRY MY EYES OUT! It's going to be a LONG time before I ever read another one of your story's and I pray I read the romance with a happy ending:'(TT). I'm sorry its just sad you had to end it like this after all they've been through. After all I've been through I've only just turned 18 a few months ago and I read this in to day it's literally 3:48 AM and I'm supposed to go to school soon:-(... I don't know why you did this ending out of all the other possible ending I could see coming YOU NEVER WROTE AN AUTHOR'S NOTE AT THE END OF THIS!:-( I got to get some sleep or read (Billy and Mandy of the night) or read more Danny phantom story's where Dani is Danny and Sam's biological daughter I hope (God save the queen) has that. And I believe (I walk the line) is going to reveal that soon. You could look those stories up on this site if your interested other than that I wish you the best of luck and that you should not stop writing stories. I'm still so sad though.

Great Job

R.I.P Cindy and Jimmy.

Great Job so far. RUN JIMMY AND CINDY, RUUNN!

What a rotten ending fuck it all to hell

0_0 dark ending...

Damn this was crazy dude! I read the whole thing from start to finish. I couldn't picture jimmy and Cindy doing this but awesome story! Seriously amazing imagery and I was honestly at the edge of my seat! You should write a novel

Such a sad story! But I love how you ended it; greatly written. Thanks for writing such a great story that I was able to read! :3

Me again. Sorry. I just love you so much. It must've annoyed you so much that no one got your ending. I counted though! They're were fifteen for Jimmy and it says Cindy emptied the gun.
Sweet Cabbages, you're stinkin' awesome. Just. I can't even. I am fangirling over this story.
I'm sorry.
I'm probably creepin you out.
Wow.

And they pulled the triggers...
And the guns went 'click click I'm all out of bullets, you little shits'!
THAT WAS AWESOME! You have to really read closely to realize there's no more bullets in the chambers! I love you so much. I will give you a pearl. ( ")
I love how so many people didn't get it. They were all out of ammo! Haha, I can't get over that. You are fantastic.

hi agian...i just reread the ending my god its great!

omg...that is so sad...BUT THAT WAS THE BEST JINDY/AVENDTURE IVE EVER ending ...god the ending, it had a romeo and julet ending but that was so much better when they said "i love you"
to each other (oh btw spoilers)and that saint jimmy...nice touch :).and the fact that there 11 just makes so much more better. and at first look i didnt read it because it had 53 chapters but once i read it the story poilt god i...i couldnt help but to fall in love with it!i mean sure it had blood in it but that all the more realistic ! and my god jimmy that plan was brillant! and man...is it sad i like the ending this much, I mean its so prefect we all cant say we saw this coming! well in my my most truthful words..they should have and then shot or in a hug, but hey this ending work just as great...no in fact better! love ur work dont stop this amazing writing style u have and as always ALLONIZ! :3

so are they boyfriend and girlfriend?