Reviews for You Were Here
Alexeij chapter 1 . 2/4/2017
I quite liked this. The descriptions and language both are very powerful and emotional and the continuous switch of POV, I've found is less jarring than I might have thought before. A good analysis of Sasuke's evolution, as brief as it was, and of the relief and small amount of happiness two survivors sharing the same guilt can find in each other. Very good indeed.

Sincerely,
Alexeij
Vamiliars5 chapter 1 . 10/2/2016
Pretty Good I Got To Say. You Should Right More.
CatLover444 chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
Very SWeet!11222222222222222222222
narusakufan chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
write more.
carrot stix chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
this was adorable, you pulled off the (wonderful) saku/naru element withought alienating sasuke. that can be hard to do, great job.
Darkfireblade chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
For some reason I really like Oneshots. Continue to write you have a talent.
SakuBloss chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
Hey Raiya-chan! Guess who? :p

Wow...this story has seriously impressed me...I loved the descriptions, and your use of words to bring the different scenes, and characters in the story to life! :p

Awesome job on this fic, and I hope that you will write more in the near future! :p

-SakuB-chan
Typical Fan Bot chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
I'm a sucker for happy endings...I consider Sasuke dying happy yes, though, does anyone never think that in order to aide naruto..Sasuke would consider giving him his sharingan before he died? So that Itachi would have to face the horror he did...well anyway, liked it _
Hououza chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
Beautiful story.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
Novice Named Jack chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
T_T I'm not... crying... just...

:lol: Radical, man! You just set me up on the right mood for writing right now, well done! _
BrotillaTheHun chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Wow...very well done. Dramatic, gut-wrenching...great characterizations. Loved your rendition of Sasuke's final moments. VEry well done. I liked how you also presented Naruto and Sakura's relationship in the aftermath. Really awesome, keep up the good work!
kpxiceboi chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
haha, the ending was kind cheesy but i can't make anything beter. well the one shot was great overall and so... also you didn't really elaborate on how Sakura found out about Naruto liking her a lot. i really wanted to read that. well it was a good fic.
KotoV chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
That was truly amazing.

I loved every word of it.

:]
Ofi chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Sad and cute all at once... I liked this very much!