I was entranced by this story.

sexy.

Amazing.

SEXY.

Amazing.

:)

YES i was so happy when he let him kiss him. I was holding my breath for Murph. wow that was so awesome.

This was...oh, wow. Perfect. It was written perfectly well and, the way Murphy instigated it was simply amazing. Great job. I admire you. :3

Good one! I liked very much. Every twincest or angst writer in general could take a couple hints from this. Awesome job

xoxo

Oh...gods. Magnificent. Utterly gorgeous. I love the slow burn - and I would say more but I can't think about it right now.

Wow.

Right, you said in one of your other fics that you were writing a challenge fic called June the Dots. Is it posted on FFNet? If not, can you give me the address? I like your work and am very interested in what else you've done.

If you can reccommend a different site that has more Murphy/Connor goodness than this one, I'd be greatly obliged. -

Just private message me if you respond. Thanks!

u should make sequel with the title of 'Darkened Angels'

if for nothing else than to amuse me just kidding but I really do like the title urs and myne...

very good fic...

mn,yummy when ya gonna update?

kinda fluffy though make more.

mn,yummy Murphy yummy.

Stunning.

This was solid. It wasn't so long that the angst drowned out the poetry and the pace. And it was just to the point without beating us over the heads. You've got a way of keeping on track. A few minor typos aside, this is a rare little gem of a fic.

It was really good. I know a little of English (I'm Argentinian) and... here I am... well, can I seems to a crazy girl, but... anyway, it was really really good...

This was really amazing. Very good, very real.

I love you times ten for writing this :)

*dances* I love it. I simply love it. One of the main parts that made this story seem real was the fact that you had second-guessing, hesitation, and uncertainty laced in. Job well done!

One of the best I've read on here. I highly encourage you to continue it, for I will enjoy reading it.