I had to stop within the first few paragraphs. I HATE stories that take fanon traits and gag style comedy and make it something that its not. If you actually read the manga you'd know Akane doesn't bully or beat on Ranma for no reason at all, not anymore than his other suitors.

This story sucks, I'm sorry.

I can see why you can into writer's block. Late into to the tenchi series to have plot unless you roll it to the Tokyo and GXP spinoffs. I haven't seen a ranma/war on gemnai yet.

any squeals planed ?

I did enjoy reading this story again and MAY attempt to do a sequel for it, assuming I get my current story finished.

Jess

This was a good bit of fun, thanks for writing!

Now I know you probably don' read these anymore but I had to say this.
The Royal Only 1st 2nd and 3rd generation tree ships are sentient beings 4th and down are not. So it is a partnership Normally only 2nd and 3rd generation bond with the nobles for a 1st it is rare and to be bonded to a 1st puts ranma in direct line to inherit the throne and partnerships are for life Ranma would name his partner. And the space tree Funaho is named just that Funaho not Funaho-oh because Yosho did not name her that. FYI

Definitely an interesting story good job!

great story ne

also point for konatsu

Nice story, it so long since I read this story.

well at any rate, I give you points for being the first fic where Genma realized (and backed) a better deal than the joining of the schools.
Also, a nice mix of cliche, "everybody is evil and terrible" but with some redeeming qualities or at least forgiveness/apathy.

im surprised you didnt put a epilouge in it like for example "5 years kater kasumi and ranma got marries and had a beutiful daughter and ryoko and aeyeka finally agreed to share tenchi"

this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

if your going for a tenchi Ryoko pairing you can use the fact Ayeka is his gradfather younger sister. Thus making her his great aunt. Tenchi mother is Yosho's daughter by Airi Magma while his father is his grandson in a way as he married Kasumi and some 600 years later tenchi father's family come along.

dont know if you are still on writing on But if you are I gotta ask make a sequel and what have you. Its a very good story and I think that a Ranma/Sasami pairing is absolutely cute.

Just found this again and reread through it. Nice little story. I sure enjoyed it. Yes, there were errors here and there. I don't catch all of mine either. ::chuckles::

Take care and thanks for sharing.

BTW, I don't much care for Akane either.