That was really sad...why didn't she get an abortion instead of torturing herself? Well done though
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This is beautifully written, and it breaks my heart.
I read this story while listening to the song for the first time, and I think you did the song justice perfectly. You have a real gift for writing.

:( sad

i like it

Wow. My heart hurts. Love the ong love this story. Written very well. Thank you.

just found this story, and let me tell you that this was the most depressing thing i have ever read.

I adore this song, and seeing that you could twist it to fit to Inuyasha already made you a master author in my eyes. But seeing that you wrote it so brilliantly made it absolutely amazing. Kudos to you and your amazing work. :-D

The part that got to me the most was that Kagome killed her own child. Wow.

You sure went deep on this one. Scary, absolutely chilling, but extremely well written. I applaud your writing skills.

OMG! You made me cry! This is amazing, so touching! You should dod a seuel! I comand it! Please?

G.E.

lovely and just touching! awesome job!

Deep, sad...depressing. I think i'm gonna go eat some icecream now...It was great though!

wa wa wa wa so sad how could you kagome would never be that evil

but i love it

...wow im speechless...you are such a good writer...You almost made me cry!, wow,

I have tears in my eyes. That was so sad...but so good.

Kagome killed her child...yay ; Oh the bitterness of this fic! Oh the angst! This brought tears to my eyes. You know...Kagome should have told Inuyasha that she loved him and that she would stay with him...cuz did she not promise to stay by his side forever?

Anyhoo...I hope that this angsty sad one-shot inspires you to write a happier fic...;