Awesome!

But... They... Didn't... Kiss...

aww soo kawaii

Well that just made my day. :) Poor Hayate. He's just so fun to mock.

awesome

those were al so beatiful. lovely. The ending was so adorable..

I recently watched and read Pretear. This fic challenge was extremely well done I love it very much.

Having those two as parents in the very first few years of their daughter's life would definitely be such an amusing sight to behold, I'm quite sure. :3

Lovely concept, adored it so much. :3

Waff all the way, woot! :3 This one was even cuter and sweeter than the one before. :3 Adored it so much. :3

I adore fluff as well which is why I absolutely loved this silly little chapter. x33 Made me all warm and mushy inside. :3 The thought of them trying to free themselves from a pair of handcuffs is simply hilarious, what with the methods they were trying and all. x33 Lovely~!

Wonderful take on the theme, adored it quite a lot.

Wow, you really have quite the grasp on the characters there. :3 I loved this chapter very much. So very sweet, just like the end of the anime. Adored it and definitely going to read more of it. :3

This is so cute

It's nice to see some Kaoru for a change :3

Nicely done!

oh my gosh I went to a wedding where the flower girl did the exact same thing!it was so cute and really funny!

gosh darn it! what a cute story! it makes me want to cry and smile at the same time. man I totally want that kinda of romance. well not the whole being dead and fighting weird monsters and such, but meeting handsome guys who swear to protect me, heck I can deal with that.