Reviews for Black Ascension |
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![]() ![]() This is pretty gruesome. I'm having trouble stomaching some of your descriptions of DE attacks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is almost reminding me of the Warriors book series- |
![]() ![]() ![]() adios bella- |
![]() ![]() ![]() spoopy |
![]() ![]() The order of the roasted chicken. If you look that up (and like chicken) your mouth will water. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, I like it. I can't wait for Dumb ass Dumbledork to try to control Harry. Should be fun. Thanks, Ron Pate |
![]() ![]() ![]() So is this story ever gonna go anywhere or will he continue be a useless little bitch with massive potential but absolutely no skill whatsoever? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this fic abandoned |
![]() ![]() ![]() this fic is a shit show. plot's all over the place. and your harry is a weak little shit.. all bark no bite.. oh.. why in the hell is Order still useing Grimauld place when it's a Black property? the moment he became a black, the Order should've been kicked out automatically. real shit show this is! |
![]() ![]() Update? |
![]() ![]() Not goig to lie i thought he was going to change snape into a woman and use him for what he originally intended for bellatrix |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your plot, but I can’t help to notice how cringey this fic is. The dialogues, you exaggerate the way how the characters speak too much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update. I LOVED where this story was going. It gave me many ideas for stories of my own as well. |
![]() ![]() Pleeeeeeeeease continue it this story is the best! |