This is pretty gruesome. I'm having trouble stomaching some of your descriptions of DE attacks.

This is almost reminding me of the Warriors book series-

adios bella-

spoopy

The order of the roasted chicken. If you look that up (and like chicken) your mouth will water.

Yeah, I like it. I can't wait for Dumb ass Dumbledork to try to control Harry. Should be fun.
Thanks,
Ron Pate

So is this story ever gonna go anywhere or will he continue be a useless little bitch with massive potential but absolutely no skill whatsoever?

Is this fic abandoned

this fic is a shit show. plot's all over the place.
and your harry is a weak little shit.. all bark no bite..
oh.. why in the hell is Order still useing Grimauld place when it's a Black property? the moment he became a black, the Order should've been kicked out automatically. real shit show this is!

Update?

Not goig to lie i thought he was going to change snape into a woman and use him for what he originally intended for bellatrix

Continue please

I like your plot, but I can’t help to notice how cringey this fic is. The dialogues, you exaggerate the way how the characters speak too much.

Please update. I LOVED where this story was going. It gave me many ideas for stories of my own as well.

Pleeeeeeeeease continue it this story is the best!