Reviews for Christmas in Seilune
Random Slayers Fan chapter 8 . 12/18/2010
Oh my goodness this was so sweet i want another a squle to silvia that would be great with a new villin and they should be a bit older to so silvia can help out that would be awsome
TheGuineapig3 chapter 8 . 12/10/2010
Here it is, the holidays again! I loved this fic! Hooray for Sylvia!

It made me really happy to read about Air Jay again. Gosh, he may be evil, but he's definitely one of my favorite villains EVER! Oh, and if he ever found out that Sylvia had a doll of him... heheh...

That evil queen lady... she got what was coming to her, that's for sure. And hooray for the sweet ending! Such a wonderful story to read at Christmastime! :3
Elise-chan chapter 8 . 2/10/2010
ciao! oh my...where could I start...

you managed to bring so much emotion I feel a little confuse!

there are cute moments like the ending and the scene with Zel feeding puppies! and dark moment like the Queen slapping poor Sylvia. I really got upset toward that woman. you managed to kill her but I would have prefered to let her live a painful life. if she was so spoiled and so power greed, make her live a life like a servant would be a wrost punishment! And I think Zel could have deserved punish that woman, it was her doughter who get hurt!

anyway, I enjoyed the time spent reading this so, thank you!

see you soon,

ciao ciao _

Elise-chan
masdfasdf chapter 8 . 1/14/2008
"AH!" screamed Ver, Ill, and Liz.

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Ver- Loved it. It was awesome.

Ill- NO! ALICE WILL BE A MENACE TO THE WORLD!
masdfasdf chapter 7 . 1/14/2008
Verity- Nobody manages to escape Lina's thanks, do they?

Ill- Nope. Still loving it. Still feeling like an advertisement.

Ver- Then stop saying it.
masdfasdf chapter 5 . 1/14/2008
Verity- The original Air Jay or not, he still likes being the bad guy. But, Naga has That under control.

Illisea- Still loving it! (still feeling like a mcdonalds advertisement.)
masdfasdf chapter 4 . 1/14/2008
Illisea- Oh boy...

Verity- Let me at er. I'll skin her alive then burn her.

Verity is trapped inside bubble... again.

Illisea- We are loving it. Not so much liking Isa, though. I feel like a mcdonalds advertisement.
The Desperado chapter 8 . 4/15/2007
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! I don't know who's leash is longer! The one Amelia has on Zelgadiss or the choke chain Lina has on Gourry! But it would seem that Air Jay would know how they feel right...right! (Starts nudging Air Jay with elbow) All I can say is very good! I really couldn't find anything wrong with this story. Now if you will excuse me I am going to go dream about Bulma Breifs...(Just don't tell Vegeta or Trunks for my sake!)
packardball chapter 8 . 11/9/2006
also really good now this one it really look like oyu hadnt got the time to make somthing bad happen or you just got tryed wich i can understand im a writer myself but not on the internet yet still thinking about the ending by the wat i meaning to ask you about the sunny and ramon thing that you like to act out my ? is why why sunny and ramon
maybejay chapter 8 . 8/12/2006
this is also so cute! I loved Air Jay's present to Sylvia and Little Alice's word. how everyone screamed when she said Secret including the LON was halarious! I couldn't stop laughing. Is there going to be more to the Sylvia Sequence?
Maurice Elias A. Nigma chapter 8 . 12/18/2005
Hey, Guys. I like the new chapter that you've done for your fic. Boy, was it a bit strange and scary for Xellos to teach his daughter that word. (Shudders) I think that this might be the sign of the end of the world. Oh, and the bit about the fruitcake putting up that misotole up towards the kids heads was funny. I mean, I almost died laughing for when he had to put it above Sylvia and Val's head. But I also thought that it was pretty cute that those two would make a good couple. Well, when they're a bit older anyway. Well, in any case, it's good that you've managed to finish the fic before the holidays and I hope that there would be a new story starring Sylvia in her own adventures. Oh, and by the way: Merry Christmas to you too. I hope that you all have a good one. Later!

Maurice A. Nigma

by the way, Air Jay is better as a Rouge. You know, one who has his own agenda and chooses his own way. It suits him best.
Nehszriah chapter 8 . 12/18/2005
"AH" screamed Nehszriah from the computer desk in her family's living room.

Jeezum crowe you guys, there could be a whole slew of Slyvia universe fictions at the rate you're going. It wouldn't be a bad thing, of course. I like how you wrapped it up. Dancing to no music. That sounds oddly familiar... *devil grin* ...AirJay knew Amelia and Naga as small children? That's interesting. You could write fictions based on that too. Wow.

Feliz Natal, Froeliche Wienachten, Zalig Kerstmis, Merry Chirstmas, all that jazz, I'm glad to see a Christmas fiction floating around. Later!
Catgirl the Crazy chapter 8 . 12/18/2005
This made me laugh, lol. So sweet and fluffy!
Sarah8 chapter 8 . 12/18/2005
I just loved your guitar gift for Zelgadiss. It reminds me of that picture of him playing one that I had seen on a slayers website. Good job and oh yeah Merry Christmas! And a Happy New Year!

sarah
Taromaru chapter 7 . 12/14/2005
Interesting chapter. Just like Air Jay to stir up a little mayhem even when it's just to deliver presents*shakes head*

It was pretty brave of Miguel to challenge Air Jay in order to protect Sylphiel(even though he knew he didn't stand a chance). He definitely gets major props. So, do you guys plan on making this story as long as Sylvia or what? 'Cause wanna see Lina and Air Jay have their rematch! _

P.S. Oh and by the way, I notice you guys puts elements from other series into your Slayers stories. I been wondering for a while now...did you guys base Air Jay off of Sol Badguy from Guilty Gear. They are very similar in terms of lifestyle and personality:They're both arrogant, have identical hairstyles and wardrobe,they're pretty cynical about life and sometimes mock other people's views on life, have scary tempers and are outlaws by nature; heck they both even use flame attacks exclusively.(Of course, Sol's a little bit like Lina since he's so laidback and casual about things).

well, until next chapter, ja ne!
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