I enjoyed this story. Thank you.

Aww...boy scout McKay...doesn't get any better than that! )

I really like this: a story set in the present with ties to the past. It makes it much more realistic and I appreciate that. :)

I realize this story was written some time ago, but I must congratulate you on an absolutely wonderful piece of work! The whump was fantastic, as were the characterizations. I loved the reason why Rodney knew exactly what to do and how he flashed back when he was ill.

Great job! Definitely one for the favorites list. ;)

Great story! Loved everything about it.

Great story! It's very good! I loved this line: “Be prepared,” the entire team chimed in together except for McKay who was shooting Teyla a dirty look. She merely glanced to Radek, who nodded to Beckett, who nudged Lorne, who gave Dex a shrug, who rolled his eyes and sighed heavily, before staring at Sheppard.

a really, rally god story this one! i loved it, read it once before but i didn't post some feedback, so I'm doing it now.

i liked it all the way, nothing to complain about (i wouldn't anyway) so keep on it! keep writing!

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chris

Cool story (pardon the pun)!

Delightful story, you really whumped on them this time :P

Excellent story. Certainly one of my favorites. Only saw one small mistake and that was where you talk about Rodney and Radek knowing each other before coming to Atlantis. In season one when SGA-1 is wedged in the stargate and asking for help, McKay says..."and the Czech, the one I can never remember his name." Other than that great story. Should see about publishing.

Very good story; but I am surprised they actually wanted to go back to the planet and ski. Ah well I guess bad memories are better replaced with good ones now that everyone is well.

Great story.

Wow - what a ride you sent the gang through here. :)

Good story telling all around - I enjoyed the tale.

I just wanted to point out one itty bitty missed thing: “There on their way, John. You should be seeing them soon,”

There should be They're. :)

English is *such* a p.i.t.a. and one of the *hardest* to master writing of, because it's been bastardized by being forced into a Latin rule base when it's Germanic in origin - the two just don't quite match! (Can you say, head desk 10 times fast? *laugh*)

Other than that - really good! I truly enjoyed this and getting to see more about Rodney, Carson & Radek pre-Atlantis was nice.

Very enjoyable!

I don't read much Atlantis fic but a friend with a serious McKay obsession rec'd this one and I'm glad she did.

Great handle on the characters! You definitely have a feel for their personalities and "voices" as well.

Great job!

This was an absolutely amazing story. I really enjoyed reading it:)