Good

nice.

interesting prospective of how things came to be in the future but I must say I was afraid for the Usa and I loved the idea of how loving Mamoru was about her being pregnant and felling the baby it was the sweetest thing

Its a very good story but I think the ending was a bit odd. You have setsuna say that crystal Tokyo wasn't built on a whim but the end sorta contradicts that. All they had to do was talk to a few reporters to secure there place as king and queen? That doesn't seem like a whole lot of work most countries won't just turn over there government cause two people say they are the king and queen of the future.

cool

Never thought that Chibi Usa could have a premature birth. Great story from a unique point of view. Thanks.

I'll strike a dissenting note: from what Pluto said, it seems pretty darn cruel to do that to a baby (on the part of Pluto, Destiny, or whomever), just to force a miracle that would allow Usagi to seize politcal power. In addition, I don't see why everyone would accept them having a right to become King and Queen even if they did enact a miracle.

But then again, I've never really liked the idea of Crystal Tokyo at all.

Wow...I'm crying. Maybe I'm too sentimental, but this was an amazing story. I only cry for such. I must say, so far you have become one of my favorite authors.

Save for a few typos, you did magnificent, keep up the good work!

(And only take my critisism as it is: constructive. _)

very well done, and very original.

I love it! great job!

This is cool!

wow, thats a nice storyline. cute

I truly love this story. Your best one yet. I love how you made Crystal Tokyo occur. So lovely

Unbelievably sweet! Don't be hesitant with your work, this story was phenomenal and gave a nice twist to not only Rini's birth, but the emergence of Neo Millenium too. Keep writing more fics please.

~Kallie~