This is what I need, more Don whump. It's amazing how you make detail about big brother's feeling.

I know this is old, but I thought I'd tell you how great it was anyway! I loved it ;)

How sweet. I love this little family of three.

Charlie is right - Don IS grumpy when he's sick.

Nice story with fun dialogue between the brothers.

This is such a great story. I love it. Did you write one about when Charlie was sick? I'd love to read that...anyways, awesome job!

Very nice story. Thanks, Beth

aw, how sweet. Warm fuzzies. I think your grammar is getting better, but you still tend to leave words out of sentences, which is a bit annoying.

You captured the Eppes perfectly here. Thanks so much for another excellent story! So refreshing to read numb3rs fics that are well written. Not many out there.

I really liked this! It was good to see Charlie and Don swapping roles. The bits of humor kept it believable. Nicely done!

Charlie is such a mother hen sometimes! it's nice to see this side of him (even if Don does try to not be looked after!)

It's nice to see these kind of role reversals . Especially seeing as Don asks for Charlies help with cases , he should be able to let him help in these kind of situations. I find it interesting how you've shown how difficult it is for Don to let his family take care of him.

Excellent story!

;-) Oh I do like that. Very sweet, but not too sweet.

spiffy. love the role-reversal thing. Don taking care of Charlie is cute, but this is cool too. Keep up the great work.

Very cute. I love your work, because there are rarely errors. Very well done in this piece, raw emotions, great work. 10/10

Aw! I love the role reversal here. You did a great job of capturing their personalities, especially Don's disgruntled feeling at needing to be taken care of by Charlie.

I really liked this little short story very much. I think these one shots are my favorite. Reading this brought a smile and a warm feeling. To me there is nothing more precious than the relationship between brothers and sisters. I cherish my own sisters very much and reading this has brought lots of memories. I also caught the reference to one of your other stories but I won't mention it so that maybe someone else can have a guess at it. I am looking forward to reading more of your wonderful stories.