Will is the perfect husband and father, and the fact that he felt so darn guilty makes it even more so. By the way, I want to see some more 'Streets' stuff, like maybe a romance between Jeannie and Steve and maybe an OFC for Dan?

Lovely story! This was absolutely perfect. You captured the tone of the original film, and the characters absolutely perfectly. I love how you blended Elizabeth's memory of Will beside her with the reality of him being home. Excellent foreshadowing as well, with her hearing that they were trying to keep someone out of the room. I'd love to see what happened in all of this from Will's POV, or even Jack's. This was an excellent story.

Beautifully written, thanks for sharing.

Ahoy, mate!

Out surfing and just wanted to say again how bittersweet and poignant this ficlet is. Very nicely done - and I love the ambiguity about where Will had truly been. ;-) And what a perfect, sweet ending ...

Cheers ~

Erin

This is so unbelievably beautiful, Kahva! I mean, words escape me for describing just how beautiful it is. Needless to say, I think you did an amazing job with it and am so glad that your muses refused to leave you along for this particular piece.

I must admitt, at first i was reluctant to read this story because the summary mention Elizabeth without Will and as I am a fan of fluff I thought to myself "Well what would be the point in reading that then". Then I remembered a good author can incorporate fluff no matter how the story is told. So I read it, and I loved it. Thank you so much for this incredible piece of work! Thank you, Thank you, Thank you.

Kahva, this was magnificent! I loved every word of it. Masterful writing of the highest quality, every sentence perfect. And such a sweet story of love and hope and faith, with such a strong message within in. You are so talented! Thanks for letting me know about the story!

That was excellent! It's so rare to find a decent Will/Elizabeth fic and this one was absolutely brilliant! I loved how you portrayed their relationship and you write very well too. Well, I'm off to read some more of your work now *scurries off excitedly*

I really enjoyed this! I love your writing style.

Aw.

Very sweet; me likes. :)

Minor gripe: Since when is Elizabeth a blonde?

This is an amazing story I am looking forward to read on regular basis. It seems like one of the very few stories that promise justice to all characters (not just Jack).

You depicted the uncertainity and vulnerability of someone whos hurt, on more than one levels, so wonderfully. I am in awe.

This left my mouth dry it was so well written. You are a genius. And thank the GODS for you!

Will/Liz is a scarcity on this site, so is good writing. You have accomplished both in one and you are EXCELLENT!

-williz

that was like... so good! One of the best fanfictions i've read EVER! It was so sad.. and then so happy, and so sweet and lovely and *sigh*

Fantastically written as well. that was great.