| Reviews for These Broken Wings |
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   MarMarStar06 chapter 18 . 12/8/2019 LOVE IT! please update... I want more. :3 It's so good |
| riptidedarkphoenix chapter 18 . 8/4/2018 Love this story, very funny. Still rooting for Erestor. Anyhow, I look forward to the next installment. Keep up the good work! |
| riptidedarkphoenix chapter 14 . 8/4/2018 don't give up, Erestor. You'll find the Bibbidi-bobbidi-boo someday. |
| riptidedarkphoenix chapter 12 . 8/4/2018 I need to see a subplot where Erestor is constantly trying to find out what a Bibbidi-Bobbidi-boo is, and goes on a long goose chase to try to find one. |
| Pathseekerme chapter 18 . 3/30/2017 Great story and I love your vivid descriptions that make the story seem like I am watching a movie in my mind's eye. |
| zuppercat chapter 18 . 2/15/2017 This story is the BEST! I kept laughing! XD Looking forward to the next chapter!:) Please don't Let the elf twins die! ;) I doubt you would but still! |
| Zinniaa chapter 18 . 6/28/2016 Hilarious , I need more ! |
| Mishi Gohiku chapter 18 . 1/28/2016 Too bad it's abandoned, would've loved to read the ending; just the ending. Of corse you could alway post the story plot and out line and let others imagination go to work. |
| Amu4ever chapter 2 . 1/15/2016 Wow! I like this! You are the second author, who has decided to let Elfling!Harry be attacked by humans. Well, this is the second story in which I have read it anyway, but since I have read so many...-shrug- I really appreciate you letting humans attack him. After all it DOES make sense. (Giving Harrys track record with luck :D) Hmm...though I would have enjoyed seeing the reacions of the elves when humans tried to SELL an elfling to them. Oh my, can you imagine their faces? :D |
| Amu4ever chapter 1 . 1/15/2016 Huh...the voice caused him to get beaten up... |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 18 . 6/25/2015 Maybe Harry should just find a way to prevent Voldemort from accessing magic and then lock him in a house with both sets of twins! |
| god of all chapter 18 . 9/17/2013 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| Unseen Watcher chapter 16 . 7/6/2013 At long last! A story where the twins meet the twins! Bwahahahaha! |
| Unseen Watcher chapter 9 . 7/6/2013 Thank you for not making HARRY all accepting of being yanked to and fro. I like that he's sick of being used. |
| J. R. Quinnet chapter 4 . 5/18/2012 So, the basic storyline is that Elrond just pulled a Dumbledore and kidnapped an innocent person? It doesn't matter if they're related or not, he had no right to do that to him. I imagine he is now going to be holding him hostage? Yes, you'll use different terminology something along the lines of how Harry is really a guest and that he has been given such an honor! A guest that can't leave is a prisoner, even if they're kind people who hold you against your will are wardens/prison guards/kidnappers, and a cage no matter how golden is still a cage. |
