To be continued in the land of never going to happen. Which is greatly disappointing. :( Wish this had an end, it's so great up until the cliffy and a six year hiatus.

You write a mighty fin story RingPrincess. Although it looks like you wont be finishing this one, which is a shame as I was looking forward to the major cappor, and what ever River and Jayne were going to be up to. There isn't really anything to complain on but maybe the way River can't hear Jayne like the rest of the verse. You had them do that mental connection thing to retake the ship but didn't really explain the hows or whys, at least not with what of the story you have posted. So thats really a complain about it not being finished. Well I enjoyed this and the 'Rayne Moments' you wrote. If you ever do get around to finishing the story I for one would enjoy reading it.

Why is it that everytime I start reading a really great story, with a really great plot, they are never finished? Please, I know that life is full of constant interruptions, but could you please finish this? PLEASE? I want to know what happens! PLEASE! Thank you! ;-)

Can't wait to find out what happens on Dionysus! Will Mal get shoot more than once? Will River and Jayne admit they Love each other? Will they become slaves? Or own the planet? Please update soon

Whoa! :)

i noticed that this story has not been updated,i hope you have not given up on it for it is to good to not finish it

aw never to be continued and it was getting good. thanks for the effort.

please keep it up I just found this story and I would love to seethe end

Ugh, another, incomplete fic. A good one too, but totally worthless if it isn't completed. Why even post it?

And just when it was getting extremely interesting too! I know it's a long shot, but will you please update this story? I realize it's been a few years, but I'm putting it on my alert list anyway.

ok love this soo far!

cannot wait to see what is going on with everything!

its been awhile but I hope there is an update soon!

i like this, update soon.

More please!

brilliant story, i love it, please continue soon!

I'm really liking this story theres only one big error i noticed in this chapter which was kaylee saying Simon could move in with her when he was already living in her bunk from when meg joined them.