I haven't read Between Dreams and Reality, and I usually don't like mpreg, but I actually really enjoyed this. It's very well written and the mpreg actually makes sense. You have no idea how many stories I've seen where nothing is explained and we're led to believe that the main character is just a man with a vagina. I'm still not a fan of mpreg, but I liked this story anyways and respect you as an author and as a creator.

actually they could if their hermaphrodites and identify themselves as male but besides that this is so cute and awesome

I hate the name Caleb. Too many idiots with that name. I'm going to ignore it, and rename him something else in my head. I know two people with the name Caleb I wish I never had the displeasure of meeting. One is an honest to God moron I dated for maybe a few days, but immediately dumped without kissing him even once not only because he was disgusting but he didn't know how to keep his mouth shut about our reluctant (on my part. I felt nothing for him) relationship and people ridiculed me.

This was downright hilarious and I mean this with the highest of compliments, I swear to god I love you, I needed a good laugh(you know the one where my sides start hurting in the best way) _

Lol. Please write a sequel about the family life :)

Oh my fuck. Thks is like, the funniest thing I've ever read! c:

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

Even though I really don't like mpreg, I LOVED this! So funny! Had me rofling for hours! Awesome job! XD

OMFG! I laughed so hard! I love, LOVE, LOVED it! It's late at night when I read this, my whole house was asleep, and I had to go outside in the freezing cold to laugh my ass off...then I froze it off but that's beside the point!

You should do more!

What a fantastic birthday present. I hope the recipient loved it as much as I did! This story literally made me laugh out loud.:)

as much as I'm not a yaoi fan at all (in other words... I have no idea what possessed me to click this) and I did not read the original fic... I did die of laughter... appropriate laughter (laughter at legitimately funny parts)...

I'm not flaming! haha I enjoyed it. XD

you could of always sed he got women pars after he tried tobring his mother back to life

lmao loved the story

ah! that was adorable! I'm off to read the others! always on an mpreg hunt... *cackles*

“Yeah well, now the baby’s hurtin’ Ed. Equivalent Exchange.”

OMG I laughed so hard I snorted!