short and good.. though i would have prefered a longer version.. ehhez.. btw, i dun think Urahara would call Yoruichi miss yoruichi.. good fic anwaes!

I'm obsessed with yoruichi and urahara, especially urahara. Read ur story and quite like it. Wish it would be longer in content though. Please write some more about the two.

*Blinks* Unless he was being sarcastic, I don't think Urahara was ever formal with Yoruichi. Anyways, good good, I wish we see more of them in series, especially in circumstances that require them to fight an enemy.

i rarely read fanfics nowadays but yours really caught my eye _ very well done :D!

Hm, well written and interesting. My feelings are a bit mixed, for it seemed to be just a fraction of a story, and while that idea has its merit, this particular instance feels more jarring than intriguing. And I have trouble imagining Urahara being so formal with Yoruichi, since they are rather close. Maybe just lost in the translation.

Anyway, I liked it well enough to make some comments. I hope they help.

very sweet, but you need more clarification maybe, at the beigining. try to reorganize the sentances or identify the speaker better at the beginning. i like. write more!~

That was really sweet! _

I wish we could see those two interact more in series...

-Ahria