Interestin story I've got a bit of a twisted mind so im not gonna lie when i say i liked it a lot

That was amazingly well-written. Poor, poor Kenny... but how can you actually FORGET being raped by your uncle? 0.O

I knew that this would be a good story. I know how fucking twisted it makes me sound... But I knew that this would be a good story. It's ACTUAL horror, not some twelve-year-old's attempt at frightening readers who've seen worse than a stab to the chest. You can fix a broken bone or a broken heart, but you can't replace lost innocence, can you.

I can sympathize with Kenny, somehow. There's some part of my brain that thinks, "We were lucky enough to have finished things off early." and feels bad that Kenny would have to be used without any return at all until Cartman is dead. I don't know which one of me is saying that, but I'm going to have to find her eventually. She's got some dirt to spill.

I'm sorry if it sounds awful to you, because it seems like you were genuinely disturbed by this dream, but I think that you have a talent. If you were to write more dark stories like this, I think that you could become excellent. Again, this is going to make me sound terrible, buuut.. I think that you could've milked the scene where Kyle confessed a little, because it seemed a bit flat and lifeless. And am I correct in assuming that the bolded/italicized text when Kenny sees his uncle is a flashback? Those are the only parts that could be improved upon, but over all you did a great job with this one. I, too, use my fics as an outlet for all of the wonderfully appalling things that tend to pop up in my head, but I can't really tell the difference between horror and normalcy any more.

This was painfully beautiful. If I didn't take my meds today, i would be crying right now.

That was disgusting, horrid, sick, twisted, but at the same time... Beautiful.

I've never read something so sad. I swear, I cried for Kyle and Kenny.

Never stop writing, you have an amazing gift.

-Pocky

I love it! Poor Kenny... he's the world's punching bag. At least he got vengence on his creepy ass uncle. Very sad, tragic and strangely hot. I know, I'm terrible person. Thank you for writing it.

I've got tears in my eyes

That's so sad!

Nothing I can say can do this fic justice. Nothing. I can say Its the best damned story and most touching thing I have ever read, and It still wouldn't do you or the story any justice. I'm just sorry that in order for a story like this to come about, a person had to be hurt and traumatized.

This was a truly touching story. You are a wonderful author, and the fact you can write about events that traumatized you- something I can't do- is a great skill to help work through all the things that go wrong in your life. The ending was very realistic in terms of how Kenny, or anyone in that situation, would act. Because life isn't always fair- to quote, "Just because we know what option's best for us doesn't always mean we can choose that option."

Also- I hope things go right for you, and that you work through everything associated with the writing of this fic. Don't ever delete this story, please, it can help people who have gone through traumas like Kenny's realize they're not alone.

Man, there I go again. Rambling with the big words yet again. To finish, I just want to say thanks for writing this. It's a story that really helped right about now.

Thank you, Twitch.

*sobbing* this story was so beautiful ; ;

I have close to three handfuls of words chasing each other around my brain demanding to be used in a comment about this piece.

Nothing I can say will do them justice.

It was painful to read, because it was so personal and beautifully written.

I just wish I could help, it hurts.

This has touched me so emotionally, you are just so gifted for that, and that you have amazing talent for writing, please dont stop.

Julzi x

sick, disgusting, twisted, and perverse-beautiful, sad, and i connect with it in more ways than one. if it were written any other way, it wouldn't be good, wouldn't be right. you have a way of turning nightmares into works of shady art.

I was seriously touched by this, It really got me thinking.

I'm sad to know that you, or anyone else, has had to deal with the emotional trauma of these nightmares or experiences. But I'm glad that your getting some of your feelings out by writing and offering to help people deal with these problems.

As morbid as it seems, I'm glad I read this. It was good to get a little bit of a scare. It makes me appreciate everything that I have.

-Anomi

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Wow.

That... ok, you're on my favorite authors list now.

You're an amazing author, and though I usually dislike anything that's not humor I LOVED this.

I'm almost angry at myself for not crying, but hey, not caring is what I do best. It kinda sucks.

Since basically any story involving gay sex on Fanfiction is usually a sappy drama fest that involves bringing in reference jokes, random (not funny) humor, and some sort of angst lasting one chapter, your story stands out. You kept it in character and the fact that you had an ORIGINAL IDEA for a uh... slash story I guess you could call it, made it that much cooler.

Thank you. Very much.

-kalila teh mae, 15 year old genius