Aaaah, Itachi, just wanted a kiss!

very nice. the excruciating build up to the instant flash of lightning release to the lingering aftermath...
very very nice.

ooohhh YEAH! XD

that was really cool, and kind of sweet...Itachi has an infatuation...(AAAWWW). Kakashi wasn't ooc for the situation (and what a situation it was xD) and Itachi...well we never know whats going on in that hunky ehad of his so congrats on the fic!

I'll be thinking about taht later! xD

it was touches of yaoi but vulgary so...something taht normatlly doesn't happen on fanfiction so I found the fic sweet! xD

zomg :D

Beautiful! I could say lots of things about this but I don't know where to start, I'm just amazed by your writing :) I could really imagine the scene, it was so vivid and still poetic at the same time. I hardly ever add stories to my favs but now I've added three of yours already... _

my chest still hurts.3

ew

Aww! So cute! It was A LITTLE OOC, but that's ok, because it was still cute. Great job!

that was really good! *author alert*

You're very good at making the story tense and full of emotion, you know... Keep it up! ItaKaka is my favorite pairing by the way!

You hope I like it?

(Or.. Ya I know you mean every reader ;) )

I don't like this ff, I LOVE it!

Please write a second part!

Your Fanfiction is really really REALLY great ;)

If you've got MSN, maybe you could add me '

It would be really great

Bye, Zadi ( )

I didn't quite get why Kakashi wasn't moving at all, throughout the entire thing, but well...

Your writing style is great and your ideas are so, too. Loved it

That was so intense ...and it would have been rather *frightening* if I had not already known it was a pairing fic. ;;

This kiss at the end was quite cool - very Itachi.

Kawaii and Sugoi! (cute and awesome) keep it up!

i love it. ive never thought much of this pairing until i pranced along. do write more