cute! i like how hagrid is incorporated...very realistic...
good job!

"mama" awww, too sweet

Billy is a really good brother, Charlie is lucky that he have Billy as help. It is fun to read about the brothers, I haven't really thougth about Billy's and Charlie's time at hogwarts. But this sounds like something that likely has happend.

"Don't worry, I like your head attached the way it is." HAHAHAHA! XD

Hagrid really love strange and dangerous creatures.

:D I squee'd when I found this story! Bill and Charlie at Hogwarts stories are some of my absolute favourites!

You write both brothers so perfectly, and you had me grinning and giggling all the way through! I love the way Charlie is so laid back and Bill's kind of annoyed tolerance of him. You definitely captured both characters (and Hagrid too) very well.

Awesome read!

Toff.x

It is just so like Hagrid and Charlie to try and raise dangerous creatures in the Forest. But...Sphinx-Manticore cross-breeds? I'm still trying to get my head around that. Really well-written, in-character and funny too. Excellent!

Love it. Hilarious! And stories about Bill and Charlie's years at Hogwarts always interest me... :)

I don't often read stories like this, but this one is really funny and well written. Bill and Charlie don't get enough attention, you did an awesome job on this; keep writing.

Cute, brotherly and so real! I could see that happening~ Great ending!

THIS

well dammit, this is just about the most adorable thing ever, isn't it? good job. really, really good job.

I loved this story. I'm probably the biggest Charliephile in fanfictiondom. Excellently written, must have for my community CW chronicles.

This is just wonderful. Had me laughing out loud in places. I adore Bill and Charlie, and you do them full justice.

Haha that is so Charlie!

I love it

I've decided that this is awesome.

Bill and Charlie aren't written about nearly enough - I hope we see them a little bit in Book 7 (with Bills wedding and the dragon on the cover, I'm guessing that I won't be disappointed)

Hagrid's accent was done well, it would appear that you either spent a good amount of time studying the books to check that you wrote things right, or you've got a pretty good idea of how the accent is genuinely spoken heh.

Good work, well done. *applauds*

this was wonderful.

i've never read any fanfiction on bill or charlie, and i thought this was a great look into their personalities and how they might've been at school. i really like the idea of charlie following hagrid all over the place and the kitten-sphinx-manticore things was a lovely touch.

good job with hagrid's accent as well! i have trouble writing him myself, and in a lot of fanfictions, people overdo the dropping of consonants and such.

i loved the last line, too. excellent job.

Liked this. Everyone, especially Hagrid, was perfectly in character. I'm always glad to see Charlie stories, since he is the least written about of the Weasley's.