This is so adorable, I think I now have diabetes.

I'm afraid I have to mention what seems to be a continuity error in this otherwise good work so far. If the school in this chapter (chapter 4) is the one that Ryoga and Ranma met at, it can't be when they were about ten and it can't be seven years ago at this point of the story. The school they met at was a junior high, not elementary school. Which means with the story taking place about a year after Ranma arrived at the Tendo home, it could be about four years in the past at most.

Really great story thanks for writing it.

Amazing story! I love this couple!.

Wow! This was such an awesome story.
I have already read the second part, to sad that it is not finished yet.

But this one.. Wow, mysterious, interesting and very very exciting. I loved it all very much.

It was cool that I got the Harry Potter’s and Dragon Ball’s clues, but I thought it was just a coincidence.. And now I know it was not.

Great story

This is a reread of an old story that I apparently reviewed quite a bit back in 2006. Still, as mentioned previously, this is pretty good overall. If you ever did an update, you might condense the search phase down by maybe a quarter or so to tighten up the story overall.. Other than that, you could have replaced visiting Ranma's past once or twice with perhaps her finding a story how a loan martial artist helped or saved one or more people

One thing that stuck out here was Ryoga using a lethal attack on Nabiki, who is not even a martial artist and could not defend herself. If I was Nabiki, I wouldn't have just told them to feed Ryoga Akane's food, but told Kasumi to tell everyone what Ryoga did, including Cologne. It might, after all, be partly her responsibility, as one of his teachers, to see that he is put down hard, even if it kills him, if he is going to try to kill people who have no chance of fighting back.

All in all though this is compelling so far...

Very well done. I especially liked how you managed to use the side characters so effectively. Although your grammar needs a little bit of work and your spelling is occasionally off, overall I greatly enjoyed the story. You managed to capture all the characters personalities quite well, even taking into account their differences in memory as well as suitably fleshed out some of the lesser one-off characters in such a way as to be thoroughly enjoyable. I was highly impressed with how you were able to take the various forgotten details, items, places and people to create an entirely believable chain of events that could safely fit itself into the Canon. Excellent work all around.

Yeah, you're right, this is epic, and not just because it's a long story.

Interesting story. Quite the different take on things. I enjoyed reading it over the past several days. A good story to simple let my mind go and just READ it. Far too rare an occurrence at times.

Take care and thanks for sharing.

Again, great story.

Well, this was awesome!

Well Nabiki is the Tendo girl who uses her brain, so it kind of makes sense.

Well, I hope Ranma at least takes Nabiki back home.

Yes Gos is a lover in everything, even magic.