seriously?!

what's up with all of this goddamnit random basic elementals and kekei genkai?
i mean... I thought it's all depends on with how many and what kind of keikei genkai did the user have. just like kakashi (and hiruzen) who has 5 of them; there's no doubt that he can copy any elemental jutsus. mean while,sasuke only has katon and raiton,and then u mentioned that he'd just like kakashi,a copycat. so,he use a feeakin' DOTON as if it was his natural keikei genkai WTFuuuuck...

but... Speaking about keikei genkai,the most shocking keikei genkai error was naruto's. i mean... how tf can u still haven't mention RASENGAN yet while sasuke's already mastered chidori? not just that tho. it seems like naruto's suiton (and...correct me of i'm wrong; raiton too?) was also caused some errors for his big role as sasuke's katonxraitonxfuton 'ultimate jutsu'(combined jutsu/teamwork in NUNS version) on par-partner. after all,"futon is the 1 who can 'HELP' katon to get stronger(,and also,futon is (slightly) stronger than raiton too)",right?
...
and then in this story,he mastered suiton instead of futon; he's basically so dead against sasuke's keikei genkai.

anyway,so far i'm still confused asf about who killed naruto in the 1st place and when; it's too obvious that wasn't sasuke's doing...
but then,again,... stunade said they've been sacrificed 2 souls during kurama's attack, at 1st,i thought the 2nd soul was supposed to be kushina. but the answer i got is twisted tho. it turns out to be naruto was that 2nd sacrificed soul. and let's not forget that kurama was only ever attacked the village ONCE,and at the same day with naruto's very 1st birthday... wasn't that mean naruto's has been died as a newborn? if naruto's the 2nd soul,where tf was kushina then? when did exactly naruto's 1st death? who killed him?

actually,the 'when' question is far more important than the 'who' question tbh

Very enjoyable.

wow. i just noticed that this has not been updated for quite some time- i was to engrossed with the story that i even forgot to write reviews! i'm so sorry! but really, i hope you are doing well in RLi've ticked Invictus as a favorite so ill know and squeal like a fangirl once you've updated! all the love!

unique fic. AU but it has an interesting take on Naruto. thank you for sharing this (and also for loving Sasuke and Naruto- because what is there to not like about this two! Kishi was practically a genius when he created them both!)! Kudos for this fic!

A very interesting alternative story to the famous Red Moon .Could there be any sequel , maybe ?

That was surprising because I thought that the Demon World was against Sasuke because of his Sharingan !

INTERESTING

FINISH THIS FIC!

Im in love with this story. I think I cried for no reason just cuz it seemed to perfect. Omg I just love this so much

When are you going to update the story!

Oh I loved this so much! Thank you, I'd love to read more and sorry for such a crappy review! Anyway, love y'all, and ciao!

Why did you do that!?

I guess there is no end for this story.

OH MY GOSH! You've got to update! This IS AWESOME I've just got to read more! I like the fact that you're slowly building up the SasuNaru and how you hint about something just right so it makes you want to read on! There's really no criticism to say other then maybe you could do flashback's for example when Naruto was staring out of the window. Maybe introduce another person/demon from the demon realm? Can't wait for a new update from you; I'll have to check out your stories! Keep up the good work; I'll be waiting! .

Nice