Well, your spelling has NOT improved and I again exhort you to get an editor!

Dear writer: Your story is excellent, BUT it is hindered by your lack of an editor! You need to learn punctuation and sentence structure, and also you misuse words and mix up words that are similar (such as "defiantly" and "definitely")...similar words do NOT mean the same thing. PLEASE get yourself someone who can edit your writing!

Thank you so much for sharing! I really enjoyed getting wrapped up in all that. I loved all the side characters, and E and D’s story came together believably. Thanks again!

Great story!

Wonderful. Thank you

I enjoyed it tremendously. Very well and interestingly done.

Okay, I went as far as the fifth chapter but had to stop. Story is nice, but the sentences and photographs are very disorderly. It's very difficult to understand you after a certain point of time. Please work on it.

Thank you very much for this story. I have read it only nowmore than 10 yrs after if was last updated! I, too, was so captivated by the story that all my other duties (starting with sleep) suffered while I read it.
Thank you.

Did you know that you consistently misspell “quite”? You always write “quiet”.

Thank you for sharing your story. Unfortunately, I was so engrossed that I wasted much of yesterday, getting almost nothing done of my list of chores!

Wonderful story!

I loved your story very much. It was very romantic yet still realistic. Just please stop killing off little children. As a mother of 3 I can't bear to read about that.
All the best
Eine-von-vier

Lovely.

Thank you for sharing your story. I enjoyed it for the most part, but found the constant word use errors (bare instead of bear, defiantly instead of definitely, soar instead of sore and many, many more) and typos a bit off putting. More importantly, the writing style changed dramatically in the later chapters, making me wonder if the same writer completed the whole story.

Nonetheless, the plot was interesting, and the characters were well drawn. I read it in one sitting on a long plane ride, and appreciated the distraction from the snoring guy next to me. Thanks again.

This is my second time reading through your story and I loved it just as much as the first time! Some parts are difficult to read because of missing punctuation or spelling issues, but I just love how you swept us into this plot. My heart ached for Darcy and Lizzy when she was working as governess! And Lady Arabella too when You explained more about her past! What an original plot - thank you so much for writing this!