Reviews for And then there was light |
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Lexi chapter 3 . 7/15/2012 Well done! :) |
Alexis chapter 3 . 5/25/2010 good story wish it was longer |
Master Solo chapter 3 . 5/6/2006 aw how sweet. |
nobody chapter 2 . 2/11/2006 hey! this is great, write more! |
Master Solo chapter 1 . 2/4/2006 wow nice J/Tk |
The Eighth Child chapter 1 . 12/17/2005 YEsh JACEN&TENEL KA! lol great job nothing to critize |
Eleventh Guard chapter 1 . 12/17/2005 Nice fic! I'll put it on story alerts and hope that you update with the other two parts soon. There were a couple of places where the wording was strange (wouldn't TK have said "Of course it's not" instead of "Of course I'm not" in context?) and if by "deepest pools of green" you meant her eyes, her eyes are gray. These are really nitpicky things, though, and I like the story. :) |