Reviews for The Eternal Gem
Lunnie-chan chapter 1 . 10/25/2017
This trilogy is definitely part of my favorite stories. With romance, action and suspense, I love and I would like many others like that. Yami and Yugi are really adorable, I love them too much.
Zena McClain chapter 12 . 11/28/2016
That wasn't meant to happen I wasn't done sorry about that.

When Slifer brought Yugi back to life, Slifer not only bring Yugi back to life but Slifer also gave Yugi 3 gifts instead of 2 (even though Yugi is male, the 3rd is for Yugi to have children, but when the time comes to give birth that Yugi lower region changes with a bright light that Yugi lower region be come that of a females region (so it is easier to give birth dead of having a c section and possibly bleed to death) After giving birth, Yugi lower region goes back to normal, but is also able to breastfeed his children, but his chest stays the same but is able to produce milk for as long the child needs to be breastfeed, only then is Yugi back to normal. Not only did Slifer give Yugi give but also gave Yami and his advisor two gifts for never a abusing the power of the millennium item for their own selfish needs. The other 2 gifts that Slifer gives Yugi, Yami and his advisors are the same but at the same time different.
The first gift is that they now have wings, (Yugi wings have white feathers and Yami wing have black feathers) (The second gift is that Yami and his advisors have powers similar to the millenium items they held but are also completely different, Yugis not only has wings but also has the power to control white and shadow while Yami can only control shadow and Ryou also has wings and power and is able to have children, also have Yugis friends be able live with Yugi in Egypt and have wing and powers and Yugi friends full in love with (Jou is with Seto, honda is with serenity.
Also Yami advisors fall in love also, but not Anzu, because she makes a deal with the enemy to have Yami to herself after a long time of living in Egypt that she falls for Yami and tries to kill Yugi and the baby only at the end of the story Anzu is killed.

I'm not very good at coming up with plot in stories so you may have to come up with that part just let me know what you think by going to
Zena McClain chapter 12 . 11/28/2016
Have you ever thought of making a sequel
The Forgotten Guardian chapter 12 . 5/14/2013
The story (all 3) were written by a anime genius. How did thou understand the game it's too confusing?
SailorChibi chapter 12 . 5/10/2011
I just finished reading all three of the stories in this trilogy and I have to admit, I found them fascinating. I really like how you twisted the story of the Millennium Items to become so different. You did an awesome job on these stories; it was a great read.
YamiRisa chapter 12 . 5/20/2009
This was good too!
timme chapter 3 . 1/10/2009
kaiba was a bit ooc. and yugi played into every trap kaiba set, even the obvious ones. it's a bid odd he won anyway.
Umbrae Calamitas chapter 12 . 11/9/2008
((sniff)) It's... all gone. ((pouts))

This was brilliant!

Naturally, "The Lost Pharaoh" is still crowned the best (no pun intended), but this was also very well written - as is to be expected.

I suppose I was mildly disappointed at the part where Yugi protected Yami. You didn't show much more drama other than the viziers checking to see if he would live or not, and then Yami asking the Gods for help. I still liked it, but my bottomless pit full of need for drama remains unsatiated. So it is to be...

I definitely loved the part where Bakura saved Ryou on the ship. That was definitely heartwrenching and showed how much Bakura cared for Ryou, and I can understand how him showing emotion publicly is out of character, so his weeping would have been a difficult thing to write; hence, no Ryou near-death experiences outside of Yugi's box.

Umm... the information garnered about Yugi's mother - how she died. I had thought that it would have taken a more important role. I understand that Yugi told Yami of his parents, and then his belief that everything happens for a reason, but what exactly was it that took her life, and to what purpose?

One more thing: in the fire in "The Lost Pharaoh." I have been waiting to finish the trilogy in case you brought it out at some point, but you didn't, so here it comes. When Yugi was sucked into the Shadow Realm, more or less, during the fire, he was aided back into the world of the living by a creature that appeared to be the Dark Magician, but who had a wilder look about him.

When you first brought Mahado into the picture (whom I LOVE, by the way!), I had thought, perhaps, that he was the one who had saved Yugi and that our little prince would remember him. However... you never really mentioned anything further on that wild Magician, and so I could be reading too deeply into things.

_ All in all, this trilogy was THE BEST piece of YuGiOh! fanfiction that I have ever read! Not only will it be retained in my brain for all eternity, immortally confused with the anime (because it is way better in some parts), and saved to my favorites, but I will be reading it over and over and over again.

I'm currently on a YuGiOh! run, so that's all I'm reading (and most of what I'm writing), but I may come back on another tangeant and read other fandoms of your fiction. However, I still desperately hope that you write more YuGiOh! fanfiction soon!

And if you happen to publish an original novel with your brilliance along the way, let me know! _ I'll definitely want to read it.

Good luck with writing, with life, with learning, with all, and thank you so much for being such a brilliant author willing to share your work.

I hope to hear more from you soon!

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.
ShiftingWinds125 chapter 12 . 3/24/2008
I worship this story! I've had flammers before. When I started my Princess bride crossover An Anon. reveiwer blamed me of being a future plagerist! The Anon people who flame you are too scared to log in and say it to your face! Please write more stories!
Queen of Light 17 chapter 12 . 1/2/2008
I always loved your series and finally decided to leave a reveiw. Your series made me laugh, smile, and cry. This is one of the few stories that got such reactions from me and I have to say you are an excellent author. I will always remember this series and come back to re-read it all over again. I was sadened to see it come to an end and to find out it will not be continued. I have hopes that one day that there will be some sort of one-shot that branches from this series or maybe one day a fic where those two are reborn and a whole new adventure begins again. Thank you for creating such a wonderful series.
Celestsubasa chapter 12 . 9/12/2006
THANK YOU 4 THE LEMONADE IT WAS DELICIOUS! lol those two will always be rivals. they'll never learn. I really loved the way you tied everything up at the end. so kute! Watching the sunset together
Celestsubasa chapter 11 . 9/12/2006
aw man did that bitch get what she deserved. That whore saw Yami nakie '( and poor Yugi almost died...again... Ryou was the hero! ) i was so excited to see his bravery in action. i really liked the fact that EVERYONE had some part in her defeat. it wasnt all Yami n Yugi it was EVERYONE! O) Thank you! i cant wait for my lemons...im thirsty i might go make me some lemonade XD
Celestsubasa chapter 10 . 9/12/2006
First off i'd like to say ...a...prostitute? lol. she was gross. SHE TOUCHED YAMI! THAT WHORE! and surprise surprise another whore is after yami's life. what a bitch. she stole Yugi '( lol Ryou was in Bakura's mouth XD i loved the way Ryou reacted. it was completely out of the ordinary. and Isis needs to calm down. a lot.
Celestsubasa chapter 9 . 9/12/2006
sorry i've been out for so long ; however i intend to reply to each chapter seperately just as i have always done.
Russa chapter 12 . 7/14/2006
Hi! Wow, a happy ending. I'm glad everything worked out. Yami abd Yugi are happy as ever to be together. Even Ryou and Bakura are getting along very well. Probably only the relationship between Marik and Bakura will never change, not far beyond a aruging friendship anyway. Well, great story all in all. The trilogy is concluded and all ends well. Espically for Yami and Yugi. Great job! Well good luck with your other stories and I'll catch ya later. Bye! _
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