First of all... LMFAO *deep breath* Okay, I feel better. I couldn't help it. I loved your comment about cardiac arrest and whump. OMG that was great!

Now, about the story...Yes there were a few grammatical and spelling errors...possibly a few in punctuation. However, they were not so numerous that I couldn't overlook them. The story was definitely off the beaten path; and, for that, I thank you. I very much appreciated the difference here. And, from someone who has read-literally-thousands of fics across many series, that means a lot to me.

I too go more for psychological torture. Always more fun and longer-lasting than most physical abuse. I greatly appreciate all the time and effort that went into the creation of this gem and look forward to seeing many more.

Cool story! I enjoyed reading it. You really did a great job at making that alien scientist dude (sorry, forgot his name) really weird and spooky. I kept expecting him to have a secret agenda, like being after CJ and getting John to go back to his base only to get his hands on CJ, or something along those lines. And I must say, having him end up half crazy felt very good. LOL.

Anyway. Cool story! Thanks for the good read!

good!

Ack! "... you're minds..."

No, that's the wrong version of your/you're there. You had it right the next line, but here you've got the wrong one. :)

Remember - your possession

you're action

Carry on... I'm off to go read the next chapter. :-p

Okay, for some reason, I don't know if this is a formatting error during the upload or what, but you have an extra space at the front of your quote marks.

“ Damn, sorry! Stupid head.” - there shouldn't be a space *at all* from the opening quote mark to the first word. That's another grammar technicality that needs tweaking. :)

But, other than that, can't wait to see where this goes!

Aw.

You know, there has to be a reason that the otter things are the largest marine life on Atlantis. I wonder if they become remarkably vicious when their 'pod' is threatened, or can secrete some form of venom? That would be so cute. Furry little protective critter. *cooes happily*

When is any drinking song ever precise? By the time people are drunk enough to sing them they aren't too woried about getting the words just right.

Amazing story! I was so entralled by this excellent story that I read the whole thing straight through with no breaks. I couldn't stop reading it was that good

How i missed this gem i will never know! Brillent in the way only your stories are. Loved CJ and Little Jim- hope to hear from them again. Nice whumping too- so a pretty perfect story!

Thank you for this I really enjoyed it. I loved CJ and little Jim and hope you write more from them in the future.

I liked how CJ appeared to each person making them think they were either insane or infected - made me smile :)

Please write more fics that include them :)

Read this again for the second time. Hadn't reviewed it first go round...shame on me. As always your writing excells. The story was captivating with each development unfolding at just the right pace. Thank you. Thank you very much for taking the time to share your talent with us.

I love stories like this! I think it kinda fried my brains... I was wondering what to write in this review, and I actually heard myself giggling in my head. And I don't giggle! I chuckle, laugh or snicker, but I don't giggle! There's only one explanation: CJ made it back to earth :)

Anyway, I digress. People that can write these kind of stories except just the usual physical bashing always fly to my top 3 author's list - which I don't actually have, but if I had one, you'd be on it. I think I'm gonna spend the rest of my vacation reading the rest of your stories :)

Can you PLEASE have Ronon beat the living day lights out of Morgana-what-ever-his-face-is-called?

Ah, man! You made me stay up until nearly 2am because I couldn't stop reading until the end and I knew for certain that everyone was okay. Where to start? Loved the unusual plot - I wasn't sure at first where you were going with this, but it was fascinating throughout. I loved Little Jim, loved CJ even more, especially how loyal and compassionate he was with John, and I'd love to see him in another story. And a 'mental whumping' can be very compelling and mesmerizing stuff when it's done well, and this was brilliantly handled. Kudos on a fantastic job!