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I usually don't like/read Lily/Snape fics, but this one caught my attention. It's well written, you can really see how Snape feels.

I love this story!It almost made me cry!

This is a lovely, angsty little fic. You've portrayed Severus and Lily well, and I like the way you've written their interaction. The imagery of the light and dark at the end is good stuff as well.

However, though Severus' feelings are apparent, you haven't quite conveyed them well enough for the reader to really feel what he's feeling (don't get me wrong; you've done quite well).

Good story. I like the way you approach Lily. I always felt that the Snape's Worst Memory scene couldn't be the *end* of any friendship between the two. Surely no decent friend would give up on someone for calling them an awful name in a moment of high stress - and Lily is supposed to have been a very decent person. I like your explanation of how it turned out, as well as your characerizations and writing.

Thank you, you are one of the only people on facfic that get my way of thinking on S/L and have put it into writing. Great oneshot. :D

Very nice - I like the thought of Lily cheering Severus up in her own way...

Wonderful! I loved your style. It flowed beautifully. :D

thank you, author for writing this book a lession for all boys...apart from that I'd like to read my fanfic

Something happened between Lily and Snape, and it could have been this. Good stuff.

Boys don't cry...but girls do. So excuse me while I retreat to my little corner and cry.

I'm sorry I didn't read this sooner. I guess I didn't realize how much I was missing. You've made a Severus/Lily fan of me. :)

I loved it! It's...inspiring. _ One of the best I've read from your work and you know I've read a lot of your work. :)

This was absolutely beautiful! I love the Severus/Lily paring. Definately going on my recommended story list.

Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. I love how you incorporated 'Snape's Worst Memory' into this, and the interactions between Lily and Severus were amazing. I agree with hulahula, this was great. Extremely well done! _

Mother...

Pure genius! I can feel the emotion, I can feel each characters feelings, especially Snapes...It's pure emotion. I love it!

Do continue, love...I can relate a little to the whole thing, but it's cool...I can sense good thing ahead for both Evans and Snape...

*mwah*

This is quite possibly the best LE/SS fics I've ever read. And trust me I've read a few in my time ;).

Congratulations!

And please - write more like this!