I loved this story. I hope you come back.

hi was there ever a sequel to this wonderful story? please say there was.

again, lots of potential, most of it wasted. you use a lot of words to get nearly nowhere.
i'm pretty sure you started out with 4 or more types of vamps but then you suddenly stopped referring to the kindred at all. not that i can really blame you, the kindred would totally stomp all over hellsing/buffy/underworld, so wouldn't really fit into this xover without a big nerf or only using the less powerful generations.
lots of stuff that you don't explain that can be pretty damn confusing to people who aren't familiar with the different universes your mashing together.
you don't really spend enough time setting up xander's mental transformation to justify his retarded instability.

Great story, already feeling sorry for Travers. When will the Sunnydale mob find out about Xander's "survival"?

Awesome story, kinda wish you had continued till he got back to Sunnydale though...

Very interesting

Hope the update/sequel comes soon :)

Hello, I just finished reading "the no life twin" and was wondering if you had started the sequel yet?

huh...this is new

So did you write the sequel?

very good, loved

Awesome job on this story!

Still dont get it.

I'll tell you some thing.
I. Did . !

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