;A; i think what i love most about this is jiraiya's narration, the way it fleshes out the character dynamics and ends the fanfic on a more heartfelt, poetic note that fits perfectly w his character. if it were written from orochimaru's perspective, it wouldn't nearly be this romantic lol. i really love this, read it a couple of years ago and was reminded of it today, thank you

I- good lord, this is freaking gorgeous. The progression and how Jiraiya goes back to Orochimaru. Thank you for reinstilling my love for this pairing!

damn they have a really awkward relationship.

It's beautiful. I love how you didn't paint the love in a commercial, lusty way that all M stories seem to gravitating towards these days.

That was hilarious and super fluffy and I was crying but now I'm smiling and gah. Just perfect :)

I really love this story. The writing is well done and I love how they interact with each other.

Beautuful story! :3

This was so perfect ;;

I've never thought of the two of them as a couple before now, Gate, I love this.
Now excuse me while I go look for more fics starring these two as I have now fallen in love with this pairing.

The ending was... oddly apt :)

omfg this is absolute perfection asdkjfalsjdf i can't even, it's so well-written and so well timed-out and just gOOD YES VERY GOOD

Aaaaaannnnnd I have a new ship. xD I admit, I've always had a weakness for orochimaru's character...and this is just hilarious. I particularly loved it when Jiraya accused Orochimaru of having sex with Tsunade and his reaction. LOL

This was brilliantly done and I loved it!
...Still can't believe I forgot to review this.

I've actually been on an OroJir kick lately, but this is definitely the best one I've found. Loved it!

It was really amazing!

Thanks for writing one of the best fanfics i've ever read!