This was great! So funny! And I love fics where Hiashi isn't horrible.

You did very well in adapting the original story and built up suspense very very well. My disdain for the original however didn't let me enjoy this one quite as much. While you did resolve the ending somewhat, I was disappointed that there wasn't a clear conclusion in some sense. I still don't know if Hiashi would let them get married. It certainly appears so from the ending, but I'd have loved to have it written down. Hearing it from the horses mouth would've been good, so to say. I did like the way you resolved it overall. I also liked that the ending was kinda goofy.

Thanks for sharing.

Interesting story, especially the end was great

nice

some choice indeed. for a moment i though it was going to be hinata who naruto would be forced to marry. till i read what went on with them. heheh

very unexpected ending. loved this story. lol on the whole 'naruto had to pee' thing XD

lol how funny our english teacher made us read lady and the tiger in frosh year. Now I am a senior and reading the dreaded beowolf...it's so boring

i read that story :)

yay.

Wow, I did not see that coming, but I knew almost instantly that this was a test of some sort to see if Naruto really Liked Hinata as much as he claimed he did.

Very nice please continue to write.

oh my gosh i really like your rendishon of the lady and the tiger. i loved that story and always wondered who she would pick, but this was just SO perfect. I was like if i was Hinata i would kill me father right about now, i mean OH MY GOSH! i was soo pissed at him, but then it was all just a trick! did NOT see that coming, so it was really really really god!

thank you SO much for writing this i liked it SO much, but i guess you figured that.

woow! I really hated Hiashi for putting Naurto in that situation at first...hehehe, I really didn't see that coming! That was an awsome story!

damn good!

totally loved it! i can't believe that twist in the end, u had me totally hooked from line 2

great work!

ha! I remember THAT story! I had to read it for Lit last year! (it sticks out 'cause I actually liked it.) My teacher made our class write an ending to it! pft! that's great! I love this story!

I like the ending of, "I can still find a tiger."