"Sadly, people didn't die of broken hearts, they just bled sorrow until nothing of them remained worth noting."

That was an AMAZING line. The rest of the fic was amazing as well, I just had to come back specifically to comment on that line. Dang.

Awwww the classic protective daddy theme those themes are either funny, tear-invoking, or sweet or all three!

love it!

Love your stories! They're positively amazing. Just noticed one thing in this chapter, though - you say vane when I think you mean vain? Just a little thing. :) Keep on writing!

This story was amazing! I loved how you added another dimension to the characterization provided by Tamora Pierce. At times, it felt like a completely different story. Plus, I love when people tell stories from another point of view.

Just a tiny bit of constructive criticism: When you're writing, at times your sentences are a little bit simple and make it seem like it is told in a more monotone voice. However, it does seem that you have improved on that a lot from your first story.

Okay I just have to tell you again that this story was magnificent.

Love from,

Charlie

hi, I don't want to sound like I'm harping or anything, but you use the wrong vain in a couple chapters. Vain is used when speaking of vanity, whereas vane is for a weather vane. Anyway, just thought I'd let you know something slipped through your editing :)

hahaha... I love how Sarra is on Numair's side ;)

Wonderful story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading the whole adventure. I'm still not a convert to the D/N shippers, but your work is too well-written for me to ignore. Keep writing! :D

I just read this story all in one sitting, (so absorbing! That always happens to me...) took me hours, of course, but I loved every bit of it. Couldn't stand reading each bit until I got to their first kiss, and ah, did that make me swoon so hard... :D

Oh, and I came across one particular review reply you wrote and it mentioned the tree that was turned into a man? I can't recall if the book has a specific author (the stories within were written by several others) but I do know that the title of the book was 'Half Human'. Such beautiful works, especially the last one about the butterfly. If you haven't found it already, you should read it.

- Hikari no Vikki

I love that cat! My mom's cat was like that, thought she was queen of Kittydom. I am looking forward to your books when they are published. Weiryn is perfect, and so is Sarra and the others.

Lady Knight 1994

Cearl?(Sp) Huh! I can't belive it took him that long to find out.

I read this whole story a while ago but I just never reviewed it so here you go. It's great! I love stories tld from Numair's POV. I have also read your other stories and they are fantastic!

Wieryn totally had it coming and its true

OMG I LOVE THIS!BEST THING EVER

Hey,Sonnet Lacewing,

Are you sure you're not Tamora Pierce? I swear that you create stories so much like hers and also your story outlines are simply breathtaking. You definitely could become Tamora Pierce the second. The stories fit between the stories perfectly, it's all planned out.

Thanks for the greatests stories.

P.S. Guess What I stayed up from one am to eight am all night reading the lengthy Daine and Numair stories.

Can't put a good book down, can we?