Beautiful ending... *runs off crying*

Now this is the type of Peter Susan i like to read, I do hope you have more or plan on writing more.

Emotional, but lovely. It pains to hear what both lovers have to go through, especially Susan. But it is amazing, really.

Amazing.

one single word can describe your story, amazing simply.

Longing gazes and stolen touches...

I couldn't say more jet I could tell you a whole story.

Thank you for this pleasure.

Oh, thank you for sharing this amazing story! I looked for a fanfic like that for 3 years! I am so happy I could find it :)

I loved the way you wrote this complicated relationship. Your words were so gentle and so... delicate.

Peter was a perfect gentleman and Susan so... royal.

I don't know how to put what I think in words, sorry.

Well, thank you again for sharing this story and I hope I can read more from you, but you seem to be out of this fandom universe...

Happy new year \o

Doks

long time ago i favorite this fanfic and today i read it again and its amazing, is full of the last one...thanks for such amazing fanfic again

I thought this was such a beautiful story, i cried a little at the end. And I loved the part in ch. 4 where Aslan blessed their marriage. I hope to hear of another fic like this from you soon, you're an amazing author.

this is the best peter susan that i read! i love how you write and the end omg was amazing , original , go to favorites NOW!and thanks for this beutyfull fanfick

sorry my bad english X3

aww love it!

I really do love this story. The way you describe things captivates me, and the heart wrenching words twist my soul in anguish. This is one of the best Peter/Susan stories I have found that satisfy my tastes. Good job.

I must say... this is one of the best written pieces I've ever read from any fandom. You have an amazing way with words. Your characterizations were perfect. Your depiction of Susan going through the photographs and then sitting in the closet- amazing. It's heartbreaking to think of Susan all alone, no longer believing. The ending to this was perfect, truly perfect. I'm struggling for words to express the deep happiness I feel after reading this. It's just wonderful.

great chapter...lol peter was jealous! love it!

this is a great first chapter! can't wait to read more...i am not a loser...ot w/e the synopsis said...lol...i will review for each chapter...keep it up!

OMG I loved it! Even though it was a brother/sister fic it was still really good!

I am in tears. Your story has really gotten to me. I was ready to boycott it when Susan lost her faith. Then I realized that we all lose our faith at one point, and what's important it getting it back.

How she believed again was incredible. Truly amazing.