Wasn't sure I'd like this, but actually did. It flowed well. There was some confusion about Ryoma's medical condition. What he remembered when. Other than that, good story.

So awesome! :D I read all of this in one day... I should've been doing homework LOL Great job! ;P

that was wonderful!and love happy pillar pair endngs

In the Phillippines, they actually make soup out of the blood of some animal. I forgot which one. Oh, and my family puts some bite-sized pieces of pork (cooked) too.

'Sayang' and 'salamat' are Tagalog which is the official langugage of the Phillippines. I'm Filipino so I get really excited when people use on of the Filipino langugages. I have to ask. Did you just use Google Translate or do you speak Tagalog?

I do not really get what Ryoma's occupation is in this story. I know he is a gang leader and all, but it seems more like he is working for the CIA or FBI. I don't get it. Then, there is Tatsuha, who's occupation I don't get, suddenly turns out to be a GOOD GUY! I kinda lost here!

XD AWESOME CHAPPIE~! lolz~, in Malay, saying means love or caress, so basically to me, Tatsuha waz saying love to Reiji before he killed him~. XD not that it makes sense... XD

This is very good. I was wondering if you could do a sequel to this fic. Anyways really good job and hope you do the sequel.

Nice story! Really like your idea of underground world. Though I hoped there would be some hot scenes...hehe

OMG. I like sooo love ur story..

its so unique..i like the way ryoma acts..i like his personality, his abilities..

please continue making stories like this...

i soo love it.!

Not only in german is 'gift' a poison, but also in swedish.

Weird story.

wow this was a beautiful fic i loved the whole story and man i was just on the edge of my desk reading it!

I was wondering what Anak ment, it has been bugging me for the longest time, everytime i read this one i can never figure what it means, i think it might mean 'nephew' but me no sure

i think this story is somewhat related to the movie "My Wife Is A Gangster 2" where the main character gets amnesia, don't you think?

Wow... Poor Ryoma! And multiple-personalities... That's make a huge problem...

That new group had no idea what they were in for when they tried to take over Ryoma's land! I love the last line"He always came back"... Though I have to wonder what explanation he ended up giving his parents about missing and about dissapearing that day...

Well written.