Reviews for Stunted Forward Motion |
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Galaxia SH chapter 1 . 10/24/2014 This is one of the best fics ByaRen I've ever read! Thanks for sharing and writing. It's just perfect. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2012 This is such a sweet story. So sad and yet so hopeful. What a lovely read, thank you. |
UnAnimo chapter 1 . 3/12/2012 Wow. Best one shot I've ever read. |
ActuallyNevis chapter 1 . 2/1/2012 So well written, so perfect. Thank-you for sharing. |
Kyotine Neko 404 chapter 1 . 1/27/2012 It looks like you will never stop to make me cry. I don't know what I can say to describe how much you're good with the words. Thank you! Bye |
Niacy chapter 1 . 9/2/2011 It's really beautiful ans sweet. |
FrostyFeline chapter 1 . 7/20/2011 *sniffle* this is so sweet! i love the way you portrayed the characters and well, the whole thing really. This had me tearing up in happiness! *million favs* |
SantoryuuFelidae chapter 1 . 6/7/2011 -wibbles- This is great. Awesome. Touching. Wonderful RenBya fic. And LOL at using fruit pastries to describe their love lives xD. |
damncritic chapter 1 . 6/13/2010 hmm... i'm still deciding if i'm going to like this or not... because i really really hate renjixbyakuya, but i like how you wrote the story about them somewhat moving on... :) |
Byakuya-Renji chapter 1 . 4/7/2010 omg i love this fic so much |
Renn chapter 1 . 1/3/2010 LOVED this, and especially loved the conversations between Rukia and Byakuya |
totallytrash chapter 1 . 12/17/2009 Amazing writing. :) |
skele-gro chapter 1 . 10/9/2009 This is so moving. ;_; |
gonegonegonegongeoengrwiioegjw chapter 1 . 8/24/2009 Sweet. Real sweet and real nice. The development is lovely, and the pastry is a cute add-on. I love Byakuya being contemplative and Renji seeming like a moody bum but whose moodiness is well explained later on. And this sentence- "It’s awkward and tentative and comfortably sweet, as any real first kiss should be"- Loved it. Totally adorable, i swear. The whole bittersweet tinge in the story and the sweet sweet ending totally got me. ~nush |
threehoursofsleep chapter 1 . 8/17/2009 That was lovely. |